This is really well done! During my first play through, I got the vibe that this might be what Papyrus had been thinking about during that call, too.

Thank you for writing!

I've reread this several times now, and it's still fantastic!
Keep writing!

Wow. This hit me right in the feels.
Papyrus recognizes the signs of depression in Alphys because he's so familiar with Sans's depression.

I love absolutely everything about this. Not only is it well written, but I personally like the weaker side of Sans that you showed!

Love it! It's that part of the game that can be really easily overlooked, the fact it's Papyrus from all people who asks you to check on Alphys. I'm happy to see a rare look inside Papyrus psyche too.
It's very refreshing.

Also the topic is very close to my heart so it made twice as much impact on me. Kudos!

This story is so sweet omggg
I love how you put it into Papyrus's perspective to show his feelings toward his brother
I hope you prosper into making this a series because this is too darn adorable3