Reviews for Lightning bolt
Guest chapter 6 . 3/24
I adore this story. So touching and wonderful x
Gabby chapter 6 . 3/11
I’ve never left a review before, but I just had to comment to let you know that this is without a doubt my favorite Emma fic—I first read it a good bit ago, but with the new movie out I recently reread the book and had to come back for more! I love getting more of an insight into Knightley’s thoughts/feelings/angst, and I don’t know if you had a particular adaptation in mind, but I think you capture the characters well enough that it works beautifully regardless of which cast your reader is picturing. Well done, and thank you for writing one of my all-time favorite fics :)
EngLitLover chapter 6 . 4/21/2019
What a Wonderful story. Absolutely loved it
2lulu2 chapter 6 . 4/4/2019
Hahaha that was a perfect ending. Except I only wish it kept going. Really loved this.
2lulu2 chapter 5 . 4/4/2019
Well done, I’ve enjoyed every minute.
2lulu2 chapter 3 . 4/4/2019
Aw this mr knightly is sooo darling.
2lulu2 chapter 2 . 4/4/2019
Great writing.
2lulu2 chapter 1 . 4/4/2019
Exciting start!
devufairy chapter 6 . 12/3/2018
I love this fic! The angst is beautifully written and the fluff is adorable!
Animagus-Steph chapter 6 . 4/25/2018
Oh! That was the perfect ending! Saucy banter, teasing and flirting! It ended so well!

I love how they both operate under misapprehensions, and that it gives us that tiny twist of sympathy... but knowing it will be alright! Now, I didn't go back and read from the beginning, but we miss Emma's transition of friend to lover in her emotions, I think. It happens very quickly when she assumes he's upset over Jane Fairfax. It does happen quickly in the book, and while this fiction totally (blessedly) disregards Harriet, I think I am missing a little of this growth on Emma's part. This is not a complaint at all, I have just enjoyed this so much.

If you ever write another Emma fiction, I will be so happy to read it. This has been expertly done. Congratulations!
myla84 chapter 6 . 4/23/2018
I loved the last 2 chapters. Great ending !
lylyevans chapter 6 . 4/22/2018
This fanfic was so wonderful! Oh how I love Mr. Knightley! His attentions to Emma were so idjeodnckwnd
The confession scene was so beautiful! Oh thank you for this brilliant fic!
Lady B90 chapter 6 . 4/22/2018
Awww they're so cute! I'm sad it's over, but congrats on finishing it! Very well done!
naiariddle chapter 6 . 4/22/2018
I love it. Beautiful end
Tractor Girl chapter 6 . 4/22/2018
Lovely conclusion. Really enjoyed this fic, thanks for sharing.
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