Reviews for The Intimation Trials |
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hazelra7 chapter 3 . 2/7/2016 Just loved it! I wish I could write more of a review, but I am spent as well. I hope you can spit out some more and I will swallow as much as I can! |
hazelra7 chapter 2 . 2/7/2016 This is what i was trying to go for when I wrote Hearsay, but you nailed it so much better than I ever could. Just amazing. I really need to quit fan girling so much, but I just love this dialog! The innuendo is hysterical. and now I have happy little trees on the brain! |
hazelra7 chapter 1 . 2/7/2016 OH mylanta, I love this so much! I mean, really great dialog here. Not just the jokes, which are making me cry but the way you describe the expressions as you deliver the dialog. This is something I have struggled with in all my stories. You do it so effortlessly. I am getting writers envy. You set the scene with the description embedded in the dialog so it feels like we are there watching the scene unfold. Just marvelous. I need writers lessons! YOu dialog is so IC as to be stripped from the writer's room. Just really perfect. I can't gush enough! |
lulu2613 chapter 2 . 1/13/2016 Haha cute |
lulu2613 chapter 1 . 1/13/2016 That was hilarious |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/27/2015 Boy, this was such a delight! |
QBMaja chapter 3 . 12/6/2015 Thank you, you were really good and I am perfectly satisfied. :) That was really a fun story. As a non-native speaker I learned quite a bit interesting stuff... lol! I loved that it was an experiment. Oh man, I do miss those on the show... or any happy Shamy times for that matter... I'm looking forward to your next story. |
becauseimsunny chapter 3 . 11/30/2015 It was really good! Thank you, mostly for, as you have aptly stated, breaking up this season's drama. I hope you do write more comedy. |
MajinSakuko chapter 3 . 11/27/2015 lovely! :-) |
nibbler747 chapter 3 . 11/27/2015 That was great! So funny that this was a classic Shamy experiment. I love when those two have fun together. Excellent story, and I'm looking forward to your next. Thanks! |
nibbler747 chapter 2 . 11/27/2015 Bob Ross! I loved watching that show as a kid...easy to get mesmerized by it! Another hilarious chapter. I like that the group in now joining in on the talk. Makes for a hilarious conversation...Oh boy..Sheldon's meat and Amy's buns. ha ha...too funny! |
nibbler747 chapter 1 . 11/27/2015 Lol! This is hilarious. I'm laughing so hard. Sorry I'm late to review, I always love your stories so much. This is so cute and funny. I love all the innuendo! Great job on this, it's fantastic! |
jessmarkOMGtheydid chapter 3 . 11/27/2015 Kkkkkk esses dois são realmente gênios! Deixando os amigos doidos ! Muito legal sua fic! Pena que acabou ! Eu amei! Bjs Xoxo |
tsnt100 chapter 3 . 11/27/2015 Nice ending! I knew they were doing it on purpose LOL Thanks for the story, looking forward to reading more from you! |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/26/2015 Your story fill me with so much feelsss, I can easily imagine them doing this in the show :) So funny and cunning! Great job :) |