Reviews for behind the darkness
myyheartsrefusingme chapter 11 . 9/2/2016
I need more!
NALEY23alwaysforever chapter 11 . 8/13/2016
I'm so glad Zoe is back with them
Can't wait to see what's next
Update soon!
Michnkicks chapter 10 . 6/27/2016
Omg please update I hope that Erin and Jay with get their girl back she belongs with them! Love the cute Nate and Jay scene he's such s good dad
NALEY23alwaysforever chapter 10 . 6/26/2016
OH MY GOD ZOEY IS SHE PKAY!?
In so glad Jay and Nathan made up
I really hope they get her back and figure out who kills Zoey's new foster parents
Update soon!
Michnkicks chapter 9 . 6/19/2016
OMG one of their babies got taken away! Inlnownjay and Erin are flipping out not to mention Nate! Hopefully they can get their girl back soon
NALEY23alwaysforever chapter 9 . 6/18/2016
Whoa that was intense! I hope Jay didn't hurt Nathan because I know he'd feel bad about that later on for letting himself lost control in the heat of the moment
I can't believe they took Zoe! I hope Jay and Erin fight to get her back!
UPDATE SOON!
myyheartsrefusingme chapter 8 . 6/6/2016
First, I cried with the video in your notes, it's really sad, but in the end it was really beautiful! Your story is really good and I'm sorry, how old is Zoey exactly? I think I'm lost with their ages :/ I mean, Nate is 6 years old, right? Zoey is like 12? Because now I can totally see her as the Zoey from the video, and she seems to be around 11 to 12 years old, maybe?
You're doing a great job here, I can't wait for Erin and Jay get the full custody! :)
Michnkicks chapter 8 . 5/30/2016
Omg poor babies erinnand Jay love them so much they need to be theirs!
NALEY23alwaysforever chapter 8 . 5/28/2016
Great chapter can't wait to see what's next!
I can't believe Daniel got in the house!?
Hopefully Jay and Erin get full custody and can adopt them
Update soon!
NALEY23alwaysforever chapter 7 . 5/23/2016
I feel so bad that Zooey and Nate think they're parents just didn't want them and that they are so doubtful of themselves
I love that Erin and Jay are helping them so much
I can't wait to see what's next
Update soon!
Michnkicks chapter 7 . 5/22/2016
So sad! These babies have to deal with feelings like hat but I'm glad Erin and Jay show them what parents are like and hopefully they can fully adopt them one day and show them the best life ever
Michnkicks chapter 6 . 1/24/2016
I missed this so much! This was a great chapter.
NALEY23alwaysforever chapter 6 . 1/24/2016
oh poor jay seeing his dad like that with a new family
i love that erin opened up to him about her dad though
cant't wait to see what's next
update soon!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/20/2016
Update soon
Rileyroo22 chapter 5 . 1/1/2016
Love this story!
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