Ending every single chapter in a cliffhanger is infuriating. Points off.

is there a sequel?

The motto was just a lie.
"They say 'home is where your heart is',
But what a shame, 'cause everyone's
Heart doesn't beat the same.
It's beating out of time."

-Green Day

Perstia is best ship.

I quite enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. :-)

-rocky

I love how the army is just being completely destroyed by Percy! And was the reason that Zeus didn't lead the demi-god/godly army because Percy was/was supposed to be? If so, then YES! I really like this Percy!

good job

So is the story continuing? Or a start to a new book?

This was some great advice. A lot of this I have found true about myself when I write. It's nice to see other authors sharing their experiences with others

lol, my stories are literally "Unexpected"! They pretty much have no plot, so 'proper planning' is a no for me.

Though the second one 'don't lose hope' THAT is useful, I think all should use that advice.

I love the third 'Bow to no one' way ahead of you there, never been much to following rules and order, I break traditions without second thought. Though I do like reviews, and because I lack a plot, reviews become part of the plot.

The fourth one, I will take a few notes, I DID love your story.

Yeah I have to write my own way, I tried doing it with 'structure' but it was only a dam blocking my creativity.

I see why you dislike the Percy/Artemis pairing now, 95% of them are exactly what you said "Guardian of the Hunt" with Annabeth either is dead or cheats. Or Chaos's blessing, I really do not care for Chaos stories.

I do like the pairing of Percy/Hestia, and you are right, there are not very many of them, but this is by far, one of the best I have read, either on fanfiction or Wattpad.

Once again, great job on the great story!

Loved the story, though I think a sequel is in order...

Great stuff! I'll be looking forward to reading more from you!

great job!

I know you say the story is big mess, but I really enjoyed it! Yeah, there wasn't the kind of Perstia story I was hoping for, but you went with the flow and I think it turned out okay! Keep up the good work!