I have a bit of a quibble about the breadmaking section. Yeast as a separate, dry ingredient is a fairly modern thing, but the wording used seems to imply that's what they are using. They'd actually be using a starter or levain, which is essentially a raw dough or batter that is maintained to keep yeast alive.
Also, they seem to go straight from the mixing to the shaping and baking of the loaves. I don't know for sure how quickly the ancient yeasts worked, but considering how much slower dough made with a modern sourdough starter rises compared to dough made with commercial yeast, and the fact that it takes about an hour for most commercial yeast doughs to rise, it would certainly take at least an hour to get from raw ingredients to ready-to-bake loaves. Probably an hour and a half, or even two hours, for the sheer number of loaves they have to take the time to shape. The paragraph as written really does not properly convey that time passing. It feels like they're mixing up the dough and almost immediately baking it as essentially a flatbread, which is not what I think you intended to write.

I really liked the story overall, and it was really interesting to see how your writing style developed over the time you spent writing this. Your writing style seems to focus more on what each person is doing from moment to moment than most authors do, in a she-did-this he-did-that sequence of events. In the first few chapters it feels like a child's writing, but by the end, without sacrificing the unique focus, it gets much smoother and stronger, no longer amateurish. I'm definitely going to enjoy your other stories...

Thank you for your hard work, this was a great fanfic to read

Have a great wedding! I wish you and the lucky man wellness and prosperity and everything good! (Does that sound cheesy? I don't even know what prosperity means...). Anywho, I'm still super impressed with how you strive so hard to edit and make the story historically accurate. Seriously! With this fantastical amount of devotion and skill, I can see as a real author. As an aspiring editor, that's really saying something!

P.S. Merry Christmas! Don't get akumatised!

I'm obsessed. Help. I want to play Hearts with my family BUT THIS IS TOO GOOD! (;

I love how you're connecting the personalities with the modern day ones ("Every time a Cat Noir meets a Ladybug, it's like a spell is put on you!") I also adore how you're showing that there were kwamis before the ones we know. Furthermore, I appreciate the fact that you're taking the time to make it historically accurate. It really improves the story and shows how much work you put into it!
P.S. Were you inspired by the Pharaoh episode and the stories of the people in the incriptions?

THANKS So So MUCH! I LOVED YOUR STORY! It is full but of creativity and the story is different than any other miraculous ladybug and chat noir fanfiction stories I have read! I love how you not only made the characters unique and interesting but you also made your story very historically accurate! Thanks for putting your time, effort, research, and wonderful creative abilities into this sweet one for a kind story! I hope you come back to fanfiction to do that one you mentioned about ladybug and chat in the French Revolution! I would love to read it even if it is short! Thanks again for doing this you made my day!

AWFEHIOFISAHUOF THIS WAS AMAZING WJIOORHIADSAHAILHWEAILfh THANK YOU SO MUCH

Your story is the best Egyptian AU Ladybug and Chat Noir EVER!. I can't wait to read one of your upcoming stories and I know you love history I was thinking If you have enough time I hope you'll make a Chinese AU or Amazonian AU of Miraculous Ladybug cause that would be AWESOME!

I loved this! After the episode that mentioned past Ladybugs I hoped to find some fanfiction about it so this was a treat to read I enjoyed your take on the Egyptian version of Chat Noir and Ladybug and their whole relationship I'd hoped they'd get their happy ending but given the time period I wasn't positive that they would. Anyway, I really hope you'll write the French Revolution Ladybug story as that would probably be just as interesting as this one. Thanks for writing such an awesome story!

"She's just a slave."
Following in adrien's footsteps i see

WHAT

on. I was just scrolling through some old stories and I found this! I love the plot, the characters, and the unique Egyptian twist on the Akumas! I've been trying to find this again since forever!

LOVELY STORY!

*Akela

just a hunch, Akele is Alya. Idk why, but I think so...