Great series. I see you stuck to Pokemon after this one like you had intended. Though you haven't posted anything lately. Hope you're doing ok.

Great to see more Olivier and bringing Scar back because of Kimblee. This is a really great trilogy though something has been niggling at me a long time. The spelling of Fuery. I was pretty sure Feury was wrong but didn't bother confirming it till now. There's some other typos here and there but character names is definitely more important.

I just need to say that this FMA series is by far the best one I’ve ever read, hands down.

The journey these characters have been through are just as emotional, memorable, and exciting as the actual series itself! You incorporated them into your own world as if they were always there, and everyone worked out perfectly in the end.

Splendid job, and I hope you continue to write! I’ll be reading!

Wow... I'm speechless... It's a very good story. At first I read only the second part, but recently I learned that it is a trilogy. I love to read about Roy and Ed working together. I also love the police and detective stuff. And all this made me almost jump with happiness. At first I was upset about the departure of Ed from the police because I really liked the way he looked in the role of expert criminalist. And I didn't know until the very end if I would be happy with a happyend, because I love action. But the conclusion was very right. And I'm glad they became private detectives. It was unexpected and very nice. I could say much more about all the advantages and disadvantages (my personal opinion about it) if English was my first language. It's a little difficult for me to formulate so many thoughts in another language. I hope I didn't make too many mistakes in my review. Hope this review is clear. Thanks for the interesting story!

Wonderful, amazing, genius ride. I'm elated.
Over the last two weeks I've gone through all three books and I Just Love Them!
You have quite tye mind for intricate plots and conspiracy theories. I have to admit that out of all three I liked the first one most. Mainly because it was just perfect!
You left me wanting to know Winry's reaction to the wedding rings and was a little bit disappointed at not reading the actual wedding, but I think you're right, it was more fitting that way: an overdue union and an agreement. I actually loved that: "it was time to finally wed".
You know, at first, when it was uncovered that Ather was Dante's and Hohenhaim's son I thought of Envy from the first FMA, and figured that Ather's rage was going to be directed at Ed, but it turned out that it was revenge what drove him and thus let to Mustang being the main target, and everything centered on him.
This is a hell of a story full with espionage, trust, blood, lies, truths, and a great lesson we should all keep to the top ot our minds: family.
Thank you Epicocity for the ride and I hope to see more of that brilliant conspitatory mind of yours soon.

Until the next time.
Amber.

I'm both sad and happy about this. Sad because I love this story so much, and seeing that it had updated always made me so happy. But every good story comes to an end eventually, and this one was very well done. The ending was just about perfect.

I'm sad to hear you won't be writing more FMA stories, but I understand that fandoms change.

This fanfic means so much to me- it's the one that got me really interested in fanfiction. Thank you for taking the time to write these three stories! :)

Just a wonderful series from start to finish.

I love the ending. A new beginning for them all.

I liked the subtlety of the Royai Marriage to be honest. Just the natural thing to do for them.

Thank you for this wonderful journey.

I agree that this is a very fitting ending. :3 I'm gonna go imagine their future adventures~

I think I've been around since near the end of the first installment? Does that sound right? Regardless of when I jumped onboard, I'm proud to have done it! :D

I will always remember this beautiful masterpiece. I think I might check out your stories for Pokemon if there's enough character development for Ash. This is so well-rounded, realistic, and I love that Ed and Roy get to still be in each others' lives.

Keep Up The Good Work~!

P.S. Ed and Win are gonna flip! Go Mr. and Mrs. Mustang!

This is hands down one of the best fanfiction stories I have ever read, and I have read thousands. I love how each story uses both characters from the 2003 anime and the Manga/brotherhood. And yet even though we knew which characters were the bad guys based on their names it still suprised me. My favorite twist was that Dante had this child that no one knew about and he's Ed and Al''s half brother who's also Father so it all ties in, and... HOLY SHIT! My friend doesn't like anime or crime/mystery shows and she still adored this. I mean the twists and turns in these! I haven't left reviews on the other two pieces since I just read them recently so I'll just put it all into this one. So for anyone who is for some reason reading this review before they read the story, (go read to story it's masterful...) I'm about to spoil a helluva alot! I loved the mystery feel of To Catch a Killer, it felt very authentic towards a typical mystery but it also felt natural, new and exciting! The roles you placed the characters in worked perfectly and I love the Ed Mustang team, they work really well together and it is hilarious to read. It ties in a lot with the original content but adds so much thats new and fresh I wouldn't even realize it was fanfiction had I'd not known that going in. To Find a Killer gets even better! I thought it would only be one story but low and behold you perfectly tied in a sequel. It transition's well from the previous storyline. I knew Dante was the villain from the 2003 anime but when she just appeared as a normal president in the last book I shrugged it off as a simple nod to the anime. But... HOLY SHIT! The whole awakening of the slumbering dragon tying into the symbol was brilliant. Edward being framed was crazy! And for a chapter or two even though I knew I should know better I was starting to believe you'd killed him off. What really sold me on this one was the side stories. To Catch a Killer had some cool ones like Greed's little gang and Barry the Chopper, but the second one had even more. I loved Psiren's little murder shenigains at the start and Selim's story was awesome too. I also really enjoyed the hinting at Winry being pregnant, I've always loved Edwin and this was so cute, (Including the Royai moments which are adorable)But by far my favorite little twist was the Prince of Aerguo being alive and working with Dante... HOLY SHIT! It came totally out of left field it was masterful! I didn't pay him any mind when he died in To Catch a Killer. I was too wrapped up in the incoming story to notice. That's why the twist is a shock and perfectly done. I also like how the story ends with the birth of Ed's son and his resignation. I thought this would be the conclusion since all seemed right but low and behold... To Stop of Killer is tying this all up perfectly for me. Hohenheim's death at the beginning and the set-up with the deadly poison red water was great and really started it off with a bang! As said before the twist tying Dante to Father is absolutely astounding! I love that the homuncli from brothehood/manga are with the 2003 villain and vice-versa, that's really neat. The parallels to the other story were really fun to attempt to decipher. And Ed seeing Sloth who looks just his mother could've been powerful but you made it even better as they hint at it when she's dances with Mustang and Ed starts to believe he going crazy on top of his family getting kidnapped! Well anyway I can't talk about every little thing since this review is long enough as is, I can't wait for the conclusion of this series. This is like the Lord of the Rings trilogy in fanficton form. SO AWESOME! You are really talented and I hope to see more your great work soon!

Nope, no disappoint! :DDD

This chapter definitely did not disappoint! Lots of action and danger, just what I've come to expect from this story. I can't wait for the next chapter- but yet, it's the very last one! D: I know every story comes to an end, but I'll still be so sad when this is over.

Yes! Go Brosh.

Btw, I'm so envious of your action scenes. These were great!

Mustang's such a clever bastard. Good chapter. I'm glad Havoc isn't really dead.

Underwhelming? That was so AWESOME AND UNEXPECTED!

I loved everything and I will read everthing all over again. I wonder if you will any more Roy and Ed partners story - your writing is too good!

Keep Up The Good Work~!