Reviews for Unexpected |
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pinkwhaletail chapter 1 . 12/7/2016 wish there could've been more. I like how they are true to the characters |
Ritu chapter 1 . 6/13/2016 This was very good! :) |
Ms.Spirit chapter 1 . 5/11/2016 Please Dont leave this as a one-shot! |
open hearts catch dreams chapter 1 . 1/14/2016 Do you have any idea how much trouble I have finding good, well written, in character fanfiction for Fruits basket (and Kyoru specifically)? Well its really difficult. So this fic just made my night. Short and poignant; really nicely done. Your characterisations are very good - they're both more mature, and you can tell that time has passed, and yet, they're still antagonistic at the core. Yuki's serene reasoning (when not wanting to throttle someone) is just great, and at perfect odds with Kyo slowly spiralling into a whole lot of insecurity. Pregnancy fics tend to annoy me - I think its so easy to do them wrong - but this was really just right. The reactions were true to who they are as people and its a lovely snapshot of a potential future. So yep; really nice work. I'd love to see you write more for Furuba (especially a one shot continuation of Kyo's conversation with Tohru after this, if you ever decide to do that), but even if you don't, best of luck with your writing :) |
emmahoshi chapter 1 . 12/5/2015 the last line was perfect ! lol this story is really amazing it is nice to see kyo and yuki having a conversation nice writing style |
Syepiz chapter 1 . 11/26/2015 Thats cute that yuki still cares about tohru and kyo Please continue writing |