6 Gundam gamer ch6 Blood Gulch pt 4
(STR196 points 25)(VIT164 points 20)
(6 points 4 points 10 points)
(16 points-10 points 6 points leftover)
(6 points5 level up points 11 points)
(11points-1point to STR AND VIT each 9 points left over)
I don't know where you put the other 1 point at because before the level up there should have been 6 points left over not 5 so the grand total of points leftover at the bottom should have been 9 not 8 including the 2 level up points spent divided evenly between STR AND VIT

lol team kill!

This. You, my friend, have made a masterpiece. This is the only Gundam gamer style fanfic on the entire site! This is a good story, with lots of potential! The only flaws are the spelling and grammar mistakes. But other than that, this is perfect!

This story is waaay to boring to sit through. Sorry, but next time try not to involve characters from a comedy eries. . . or follow it word for WORD.

Stone also has almost no prescence in it. Just a few fights here and there that have no meaning to them, so I feel no tension from any of them.

Next time just choose a gundam story or something and stick with it. Hell, add some twists and surprises. But don't do this.

Zaku hunting anybody ?

sweet

I hop it going be a four way battle between amuro,stone,sarge and char in Gundam char counterattack.

Wait, didn't he buy that [Once in a lifetime deal]? Does that mean all his Ranked Titles stack now cuz that would be OP...
Overall: 9.8/10 Do to some minor errors :D

well you nail the crossover on red vs blue so the gundam crossover is unnecessary, since it doesnt have a plot on any gundam story.

Yeah. Usually when I don't like a story I don't bother reviewing but since I'm a huge gundam fan I'll make an exception. This doesn't work. Simple as that. I know you said it's a multicrossover but jamming in as much stuff is a surefire way to ruin anything. There are a few points I'll highlight and mention here

1) The gamer aspect is without a doubt a popular trope nowadays. In this fic however it just sort of feels tacked in to satisfy a personal checklist. Yes it gives the excuse for having an oc into a universe but the concept of the base just makes it unable for us to connect with the world since you basically said the character will be like a God which isn't godlike powers which brings number 2

2) This is a self insert right? Usually these stories have an oc in a canonverse affecting stuff and trying his best to cope in a new world. With your gamer tag on and the gamer's mind it just makes the oc's reaction 'meh'. Literally. He's bland doesn't have any interesting traits and just goes with the flow..

3) There's a reason most crossovers just include 2 maybe 3 verses and that's just a few elements. Basically anything that has more just see this in chapters of the tutorial. We get rvb, which in itself is a halo crossover, and UC gundam which if you just used characters from would be fine for giving unimportant characters names. But then you try to have a humorous conversation to capture the rvb vibe that it contrasts the UC gundamverse that's supposed to be very serious. You even have MJOLNIR armor which as a gundam crossover doesn't make sense! I came to read about gundam not rvb with mechs...

4) The pov is atrocious. It jumps from mc to side characters having a discussion then to the opposing siderandomly talking about their mobile suits, back to mc fighting then to side charcters and it just keeps changingfrom first person to third person randomly and we get one highly confusing and difficult to follow story. At least seperate differing POVs..

That's all I have to say. I know this can be seen as bashing on your fic but the lack of good gundam fanfiction is making me write this. Focus more on gundam without making it a reason to supply various characters with mobile suits. Do waht you will with my review. I hope you consider it and improve where I mentioned. Or not. Up to you. Rant over.

This is funny and awesome. Can't wait to see the next chapter!

are you gonna build an army and pit it against a world power? like ME citadel or code geass britannia or maybe create a many way war on the fields of gundam seed?

*Crossread last chaptersigh* You know, i just stop right here. I not interested in RedBlue, this strange Gundam sport-esque thing is too boring and too long and repeating jokes from original show not making it's funny. Even main character isn't likeable.
I though it's just prologue, but word-count insanely hight for it, so all story gonna be like this it's seems.

Okay really why did you have those 2 come back to base with him and spend HIS money.

I really hope Blood Gulf ark ended here and messing with Gundam's timelines starting here.