You should update this story, it is probably the best one of Zeref and Natsu that I have seen so far. Most people focus on the fact that he knows dark magic, and they never think about his back story with Natsu, or how much of a curse his magic is. It is refreshing to see a story with this point of view, because so few think like this.

You have to continue! This is amazing! : ) : )

I love this story but I hate the part where they hurt the kids. I hope that Zeref would find Natsu soon.

A new chapter!? I'm so happy!

Love it UPDATE SOON

love the story but what happed to natsu I think it would be cool if you had a chapter or to with natsu to see what happened to him and how he handled It. UPDATE SOON

Next Chapter PLEASE~!

Que paso con Natsu donde esta el

I like it! :)

Wow! Love the plot. Wish there was more stories like this featuring Zeref and the pairing being yaoi. The only other stories that features Zeref and a male partner is written by V. Shalyr.