I knew from the second you described the konoha kid as cheery, 'It's Kabuto!' And Dayum! Kabuto sooooo burned her. Honestly, I can see the end route of this story probably only being they devour/destroy each other (Orochimaru & Shikai) In terms of now, she just seems content with branching out and away to further invade. And I can't tell how creeped out Orochimaru is by her 'rebellious phase' I'm always making comparisons, so if you've watched Subete ga F ni Naru, this feels like a Professor Miki and the director relationship dynamic. (Long story short, It's technically not unhealthy, but it's not normal because the love is all consuming) The thing about having sex in this fic. . . It'd be a weird tilt-a-whirl of 'who is in control?' depending on how you would fit it in. Cause he's afraid of her devouring him and if he exerted dominance through sex, she would be devouring him and he, her and if you decide to put any in I expect you would have it less complicated and more fitting than I'm making it.

Oh my god, this is so great. I'll be waiting for 4 :D

You don't know how long I've waited for a fic like this, I love it! It's dark and it's suggestive, and it's great. I definitely think Orochimaru is a character that is way less appreciated in fan fiction than he should be, this definitely deserves to be continued!

Merry Christmas. I will leav abetter review next time otherwise, I super enjoyed. Just a bitt ired.

I'm afraid to say how much I love it because it's both scary and great. I've never read such a dark fic, but considering this is Orochimaru I don't think I can expect anything else. It's raw, dark, animalistic goodness and I can't wait for more. Really looking forward to chapter 3!

I can't tell if that "F*ck immortality" was a pun or not. . . So in this chapter we see the tie that binds her to him. We see her angry and why. Maybe a show of why she is so manic? Or why she came to idolize him? I like how not there Orochimaru is and still manages to be so prominent. He's just creeping in the shadows. . . (Pretty much like he is in canon) Oddly enough, the only thing that bothered me in this chapter was the girl with the elephant strength getting her head shoved to the ground and strangled. So she, with the assortment of people she fought, is already strong to a degree, trained by her mother and father and now Orochimaru. Is she affiliated with a ninja village? Or is she rouge now?

You sure know how to make upcoming chapters sound fun . . . While content wise, I can't say this chapter tells me exactly what the story is about (aside from a girl and Orochimaru), but it does make a great gateway for the story. It makes me want to read more and tells me that tone and direction the story will take. (Even without the author's note) Also a good point is how you never say Orochimaru's name here, but it's so obviously him. The dialogue and actions feel like him.