Es tan buena, realmente bale la pena que la sigas desarrollando

Stories like this never get past the prologue are usually very good Whyyyyyyyyyyy?

S il te plait continue un si intriguant prologue a quand la suite j espere que tu vas bien

Hey there.. I'm enjoy your story and I like it, and my favorite pairing is naruhina, and I tell you now you make good opening, so please continue this story because I'm so curious :D

I really like this take on Naruto, and I can't wait to read more. :)

I really like your take on Naruto, it's refreshing and totally unexpected. Can't wait to see where you're gonna take the two biggest knuckle-heads in anime.

Me encanto ! Tengo la esperanza de una actualización pronto Por Favor !

I really like the story a lot already. I like how Naruto left and told Baa-chan. It was calming and accepting kind of feeling. There was no anger just a kind of peaceful feeling. I loved that part. The way that Tsunade saw the images of great heroes following beside Naruto. Luffy and the crew's reaction was quite entertaining. I agree with you saying Naruto shouldn't take all of Luffy's fights. But I think he should be able to stop the fight with all of them being sent to different places. Also so that Ace can be saved. I'm really looking forward to seeing more.

This Seems Pretty Good Hope you update Soon :D

Like, Really good,
I'm actually impressed,
Kinda put off by the strange change in life decision, Only in that I am adamant about wanting to see one where he doesn't change it. (I've seen a couple, but the situation was still weird, and required him to have knowledge he didn't in canon)
His stubbornness is at the level i Just Can't see him giving any dream up.
But I like how it was done.
It also makes more sense to behave this way in a World-Government controlled environment.
B.T.W. If i were Naruto, And ANYONE ruined my dream, I'd MAKE THEM REGRET EVER EXISTING,
Purely from pranks, blackmail, and driving them MAD with anger.
So joining the Stawhat Pirates, With Luffy Specifically. That's more than perfect. Go crazy with that.
What i like mainly is that his attitude didn't change what-so-ever form this while meeting the pirates,
Goofy, Go-lucky prankster Ninja. He WILL live a prosperous life (Because he's stupid lucky at all chance related events)
Enjoy your work, because you did good.

Interesting. Keep going.

Cool, you have a thumbs up from this guy. Can't wait for the next chapter.

You caught my interest, I want to see where you go so update soon.

so help me if i find one more person that writes literally ONE chapter that is actually worth a damn and gets me addicted, just to walk off the edge of the earth never to return, i WILL find their home and make them the sole focus of my cumulative frustration,
(don't worry you're good, im talking about the next guy, IF you walk off the earth, and i hope you don't, *that would hurt* I would only be stalking the guy AFTER you.)

Naruto and Hinata made this fic all the more enjoyable to me.