Reviews for The Light amongst the Dark |
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caelestihydr4 chapter 15 . 1/23/2019 i kind of like 2 and 3 |
GordonFreeman72 chapter 15 . 1/22/2019 Uhhhh hey there, do ya think that you could maybe uhhhhh... idk maybe write another love story for me 'cos I'm a total sucker for romance and that crap? I've got a community suggestion: You should look into the Titanfall/Titanfall 2 universes, pretty cool people and stories over there. Also, option #4, another OC/OC romance, hurt/comfort fic, but this time a male human Warlock named Jay Holt and a female human Hunter named Evelyn Gale? |
BraviaryScout chapter 15 . 1/21/2019 Wonderful story man. Glad you were here to stick it to the end. This makes me want to try and write my own Destiny fic. My only real criticism for this would be that you had a big opportunity to name their son Christian after Jewel’s first love. Other than that, this was super enjoyable with how close the entire team plus Jewel. I’d say write all three! Although the first one sounds like it would be the most interesting. I’ll keep an eye out for any when they get written. Brav |
LeftGirl chapter 11 . 12/5/2018 Hey, I came back after more than 2 years hoping you continued your story. And you did! Love you story, please keep going. |
caelestihydr4 chapter 11 . 11/12/2018 I STAN PLEASE HURRY |
t1m3fr3ak chapter 11 . 11/12/2018 great chapter man. can't wait for the next one. and Cayde, you go man, screw Zavala, He's a dick, and a coward, show em what a real vanguard acts like |
caelestihydr4 chapter 10 . 11/9/2018 oh shit |
Guest chapter 10 . 9/2/2018 Damn... Keep it up! Dying to see what comes next |
BraviaryScout chapter 10 . 9/3/2018 Guess Jewel’s instinct was right. Aaron is in trouble! Hope he gets out alright. Brav |
t1m3fr3ak chapter 1 . 9/2/2018 nice chapter man! can't wait to see the next one. if I could suggest a new character to you would be my Hunter from my story Destiny The Last Front; Guardian Eleven. read it if you would like to. |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/8/2018 I really like all the chemistry between Aaron and Jewel. The rest of his team is really neat to read about as well. Keep it up. I want to know what happens next. Brav |
me chapter 8 . 8/5/2018 O MY GOD THIS IS LITERALLY THE BEST BOOK IVE EVER READ LIKE EVERRRR |
littleballoffire2206 chapter 8 . 5/21/2018 aw ye! can't wait fam! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2016 Are you MORMON TOO!? |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/7/2016 This is so amazing pls update I'm begging |