| Reviews for The Cracked Ice |
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   thelords chapter 11 . 8/3 does this story still live? |
| knightofthewintermoon chapter 1 . 7/25/2019 I know that frame you describe. Blizzards caused by its mere presence? That could only be Frost. |
| Stickmanreader chapter 11 . 6/11/2019 whens the next Part? |
| Stickmanreader chapter 5 . 6/11/2019 So what this void key is telling me is that he modded his warframe? |
| bbjames1999 chapter 2 . 1/26/2019 I like how you portray fight scenes though I question how well you know the material did you make this before or after second dream because tenno's aren't exactly emotionless in fact its emotions that help them focus and use their void powers as well as connect with the warframes. |
| LordXeenTheGreat chapter 1 . 11/16/2018 great beginning |
| C0de5 chapter 11 . 11/11/2018 Firstly, this is one of my favourite Warframe and RWBY crossovers or maybe one of my favourite crossovers in general. I love it how you have depicted the warframe (Frost) as close as to the lore of warframe where they are machines that were made to kill and beings that doesn't feel remorse, willing to do whatever it takes to get the job done which is something that i don't see in other warframe crossovers. I personally don't think that you should include anymore warframes as to keep how mysterious frost is right now to the RWBY cast and from having too many frames in the story where it gets messy. I also don't think that the operator should be in the story but if they are have them only in a few chapters because Ozpin, Layla and the rest seeing that Frost is a child behind the Warframe would be really off putting but those my thoughts. Really enjoying where this is going and can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2018 You better not let this die! |
| CreatedChimera chapter 11 . 9/19/2018 Absolutely loved everything I read hope to see it continue |
| Bagrat chapter 11 . 7/31/2018 I find this story *really* intriguing. I anxiously await new chapters. |
| Vossoch chapter 1 . 7/9/2018 Also this is the most favourited/followed story in this section do hope you haven't left such a masterpiece to rot. |
| Vossoch chapter 1 . 7/9/2018 I agree with that guy below me! |
| dragon - wolf - thing chapter 11 . 7/3/2018 I have 3 issues with this story 1. no mention of language problems or anything? Do they just coincidentally know what eachother is saying? 2. I don't remember what I was gonna put as #2 3. I accidently read the whole thing in one sitting and now I'm sad in other words: I luv itI wish there were more stories like this |
| Vossoch chapter 11 . 7/2/2018 Oho. now this is a story I enjoy! I just adore Frost Frames! |
| BreatherOfInsanity chapter 11 . 6/8/2018 This is really good! I can't wait to read more! :) |
