Reviews for A Little Innocent Game
Gadget30thAnniversery chapter 1 . 8/9
I like how TK and Kari’s friends finally got them to give in to their feeling I also like how Kari is the more dominant one in the relationship in each one of your Takari stories
AnimeBo001 chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
Best oneshot I ever read
XP9 chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
The extent of the kiss was a bit weird considering that their friend were still in the room, but otherwise this was a cute story.
shrimproll chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
I don't know if it only happens to me but I already had a feeling that Yolei only writes TK's name, haha. I suspected it when Davis mentions Yolei wants to kiss Ken, haha.

Tbh, Pocky game is one of an interesting plot that I'd like to make in the future, with different conditions and plots, of course. But what I never imagine is that they would be frenching on their first kiss, although I had known that it would happen since YOU're the author, hahaha!

I really like TK's last quote 'the condition is that we're now a couple and I can kiss you during our date.' It's enough sweet for me, and when Kari tells him that he shouldn't be an exaggerated boyfriend before they kiss under the sunset. Good job, anyway!

And reading this makes me want to see 02 kids, I dunno why...
psychology nerd chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
loved itits one of the cutest takari stories I've seen in a while. nice job
ArcaneWolfCos chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
I love this little oneshot. I could definitely feel the burning passion between them. Definitely laughed at the twist of having all the names be TK's, that would be something Yolei would do.

I do like how you made Kari say that nnothing changes between them, because that's how I see them as a couple. They're still best friends in a way.
Atariel Tsukai chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
This was SO GOOD!

I called it to myself that Yolei rigged the game so that Kari and T.K. would have to kiss! She's so evil and the best!

I also laughed quite a bit when Yolei started to complain that she hadn't meant for them to make out on the floor. And then again when Kari told T.K. that she didn't want him to cancel their plans for the next day to plan some big first date.

So cute and definitely inspiring for me while I'm working on my own fic!
invisible-nobody15 chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
That was amazing! I always enjoy reading Takari fiction and I've always enjoyed reading your writing.

I have a question for you, based off of what little we have gotten so far in Tri, what do you think is going to happen with the ships that they forced down our throat, and what the hell happened to the younger kids (who obviously can't be dead, since it was stated that either Paildramon/imperialdramon is going to be in the next OVA)?
Green-Extreme-Ninjetti13 chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
I was wondering if you'll a Davis/OC one-shot?