Wonderful story! This was very creative!

Oops I found myself absolutely loving this.

Surprisingly enjoyable. There were things in it that on principle I wouldn't have liked on their own (like that fourth wall leaning "what's a video game?" moment or how the Asriel/Chara plotlines get handwaved with Frisk finding a way to fix things offscreen) But overall the whole thing works together nicely. I particularly like how much personality the second person narrator has. They feel like a real person with their own opinions and history, and not just a blank slate for the reader to project themselves onto. If anything my one note would be that I would have liked to see even more of that. Great job overall though.

YOOOO THIS WAS SO GOOD I CANNOT I love the shady government agent thing it's so brilliant! And Sans was amazing oh my god. Also Frisk you adorable little boss you aww you're so amazing. Really good job on this fic! I love it!

ohhh gosh. this is good! very realistic for a happy ending and very original! would you be opposed to it if i drew a comic from it?

Very cool. I usually don't like one-shots, but this one takes the cake. :)

Oh my God I love you