Hey! You should update. You must stop the evil Mary Sue army at all costs!

NO WHY DID YOU STOP HERE? What happened? It's full moon? Update soon :)

This is absolutely amazing. I think I might be in love...

Yay! You chose Fenrir :D!

Maybe I would keep some resemblance to the original.

What is the "s" after the exclamation mark at the end for? I like it!

Sue army, lol. :'D Have you checked out pottersues on live journal? It's a cool blog.

Fenrir Greyback should be the villain of your story, he seems perfectly villain-y, plus he's actually canon.

Glad you removed the unneeded Draco/Ebony/Vampire love triangle, that was just not necessary and replaced it with a well-written rivalry between Ebony and Daphne Greengrass.

Maybe you should add more situations from the original though.

I don't know if Ginny is a Sue.

I've read My Immortal multiple times, because it makes me laugh so damn hard each time. Great idea, by the way. I've never read a rewrite before, I usually read commentaries. So this was something new. :)

Luscious Badboy! Love your story. I don't really think Ginny is a Mary Sue at least not in the beginning but that would make a good argument

I vote for Lestrange. Great fic! If I ever write a fanfic I will use this.

Didn't notice this one . . . oops

You didn't run! **applauds**
Great chapter!

I say Fenrir, Lucius is too cute;P

And, you're 12? You write amazin, certainly much better than I did!

Fenrir Grayback. I don't like him. He hurt Moony, and Moony, I am unashamed to say, is my favorite. So yeah.

Ok. This is really informative with humorous parts mixed in! well done so far!

I love it! Your story is so unique! Write more pwease

Nice chappy :). Definitely checking out the commentary!

I have fulfilled my dream of becoming a regular reviewer.

Well. Regular-ish.