This is a good story, but it feels incomplete. Like it is only a half of the story. I wanted to see them do the deed. Oh well . . . I enjoyed it anyway.

Oh sweet mother of god I love it XD

A few points:
- the language you use is fantastic, it suits the story perfectly
- every description is fluid and the images they create, are gorgeous
- there's depth to the characters, even though it's literally just dropped straight in to the thick of it :)
- I love the idea of them all having a drink. Shepard and Kai may have been together, but Ash is definitely the best friend that teases them XD

I'm in love with this!

This is lovely!

Jane Shepard sure knows what she wants and she goes straight for the kill. Kaidan never had a chance, lol! How very naughty, considering Ash is sleeping in the bed next to them.

The teasing (from Jane), the awkwardness (Kaidan) and the desire (both) between them is hot and sexy. You capture the feelings and the atmosphere as awesome as always! I'm fairly certain Shepard's whispered "We'll just have to be quiet, won't we?" tore away the last vestiges of his restraint.

And then Ash waking up! Oh my goodness, I think Kaidan and Shepard nearly panicked there for a moment!

I loved it. You should write more ME1 oneshots!

Well, I defintely think you should write more ME1 Shenko. It's so fun! This was fantastic. The heat, and the unsatisfied desire. It's fantastic. I love Jane, she's so sure of what she wants and she's not afraid of it. I'm not surprised Kaidan can't hold back.

This was great. I loved it!

Good one
I knew you 2 were lying
Omg can't stop laughing

Very hot, and naughty too! Just the right mix of sexual tension, awkwardness, and carefree drunkenness!
Loved it! :)

Aww! I loved this, so, so cute and so funny! Great job (as always!) :)

Ha! Tell yourself what you need to, Kaidan. Tell yourself what you need to.

There is a lovely sort of adventurers heading out to save the day innocence to the ME1 arc. Yes, it is fraught with danger and there are moments of horror, but there is still the complete confidence in the fact that the day can be won. An innocence and confidence that allows for this sort of playful forgetfulness where the later arcs don't as much.

Fun and cute and sexy little one shot with snuggling. Snuggling and playful is good. I like it. Nice work.

Fabulous!

*fans self* Oh yeah. That got the blood pumping. Need a cold shower now (you have a gift for making me need those)

I love ME shenko. So sweet and innocent, and yet not. This is a great short, another moment when they aaaaaslmost but not quite get it together.

Ashley is soooo drunk in this that its funny. I thought for sure that she had caught them, but love what you did with it instead, having her drunk ass focus on the liquor and not the fact her two commanding officers are in the floor together. That was a hilarious twist and it got her to leave so they can really have fun.

Fantastic shot of shenko. I love it.

Very cute! I wonder how much Ash remembers the next morning? Lol!

Yay! I especially love the innocence of ME1 Shenko. Good times.

You really can't trust those two together!
I was waiting for ash to start teasing them, but I am sure she would in the morning!

This was just so fun and cute that it has me grinning like an idiot. I love it!

Can't leave these two alone for more than half a hour.

ROFL. Oh, dear, Ash is REALLY loaded.

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Jane: No one else knew, we were alone.
Kaidan: We weren't alone, Ashely was drunk under the table.
Jane: What?
Kaidan: I can't believe you don't remember, she threw up in your shoe!
Jane: That was ASh?