This was some epic stuff, no joke. Loved every word of it. You managed to bring both dark stuff and super sweet stuff into this. Also, Max definitely has a point there, I believe.

Super glad I didn't drink anything unlike Chloe though.

holy shit, every sentence, right in the feels. Any chance of this getting continued?

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TOO MEEE!

Damn this is really fine fic, written the way you have perfected - a certain type of chamber dramatic romance, written in a way that makes the characters real, believable, lets reader quickly connect with them. Because unlike many other pieces this one focuses more on characters than the plot. Keep it up the same way and everything will be perfect. Great piece.

Really hoping that you are continuing this story. I love it so far and that last scene was awesome. I can just see Chloe doing a spit take at hearing Max's request lol.

It was great fun reading through the chapters so far. Max and Chloe are really in character, particularly Max's request in this chapter. I'm not going to say it was a Max thing to say (can't imagine she's ever uttered 'I want to have sex with you' before), but I could almost see the cogs turning in her head that led her to that conclusion- and that's what makes it a perfect Max statement.

Hope to read more! Because this is really good.

Extremely well writen. I love the way you use words and describe things.
Max asking Chloe out made me burst in laugher. But it also suits her so well, she seems so innocent, so Max style ;)

My fave LiS fanfic so far.
I hope you continue this story. Excited for more chapters :)

Greetings

Awesome story - thx! Really looking forward for more. :)

so I went into this expecting it to be everything I was disappointed not to see in the game. And it is. But it's also better, because it's the view into Chloe's head that I didn't even know I wanted.

Thank you. :

(I should add that Chloe seems a little bit too together, but I'm more than willing to accept a post-apocalypse Chloe that's more mature than game-Chloe seemed to be to me.)

Awesome chapter.

Oh god it is just so adorable. You literally had me laughing out loud when Max said she wanted to have sex. Looking forward to more.

I get this really cinematic feeling while reading this and I freaking love it!

Of course max wouldn't subscribe the to mainstream views of anything. Your writing is still a pleasure to read and I don't think your wildly OOC for either yet. Slightly harder to tell now we're in uncharted territory of the post game but good so far.

Keep up the good work

awwwee gods this was sooo cute.

so perfect, kinda sudden considering its the start of this story but... hardly sudden at all if you remember the events leading up to it i guess.

ahh i love it.

awwee so sweet.

they really are a magnificent couple. thank you for taking the time to write this, it is very well put together and in character.

i look forward to reading more.