Reviews for National Treasure
Lhbriggs101 chapter 16 . 9/28/2019
Wow I can not wait for more
Guest chapter 3 . 7/11/2018
Loki: I became good at everything after I met the other richer kids.
clio1111 chapter 16 . 1/27/2018
Great story. I hope you can continue with it soon!
blackbloodywolf chapter 16 . 3/16/2017
that took a turn
marbledrum chapter 16 . 6/23/2016
Will you be writing more of this story?! I do hope so...x
I.C.2014 chapter 16 . 3/19/2016
Oh god.
I hope that a solution is found. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 16 . 2/27/2016
When can we see more chapters?
Mila Pink chapter 16 . 2/3/2016
OMG!
I love babies! They're so cute.
Thor and Loki are so gorgeous together.
I need to read more.

Kiss
pallyndrome chapter 16 . 1/31/2016
Aw I love how the babes turned out - just the right sharing of traits! Good thing Loki didn't die though I would have liked more angst about it. And now you're taking into war so that should be interesting!
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 16 . 1/31/2016
Any chance they can make peace by betrothal of one of their children to the Jotnar and marriage once both reach majority? Glad both children born healthy and Loki survived.
ThePlatinumLotus chapter 16 . 1/31/2016
War after Loki had the babies! Oh dear...lets hope this doesn't get too bad. Now I wonder what the women will think when they see the children. Clearly Loki's labor was bad. More updates please!
kyuumihaira chapter 16 . 1/31/2016
Noooo! That cannot be! Things were finally happy!
Killua17 chapter 16 . 1/30/2016
Oh no, come on Loki I know your smart enough to come up with a solution.
Your AWSOME!
Nychell21 chapter 15 . 1/20/2016
O.O, WoW...that was...*cough*...nice(yeah right that f $#ing awesome!(l mean the story).~\;}
Killua17 chapter 15 . 1/19/2016
Come on Loki if anyone can find a solution u can
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