Reviews for Jar of Sins
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
This is so good! Need more!
Reginleif2004 chapter 1 . 7/14/2016
Pardon me, but have you ever read "The Empty Box and The Zeroth Maria"? Because I'm pretty sure that's the work you're drawing from, and I seriously enjoyed that story. Looking forward to seeing if you do something different with it.
Bobathanhigs chapter 1 . 4/1/2016
Uh-uh. Nope. I don't think so.

Anybody reading this review I just want you to take one measly minute to search up the Light Novel "Utsuro no Hako to Zero no Maria" or it's English translation, "The Empty Box and the Zeroth Maria". Just read the summary of that story. Then read the summary of this story. Think of a box. Think of a jar. Then look at his inspirations for this story.

Funny...
EmbraceMadness chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
Hi. This is a really good story and concept for PJO, and I'd really like to see it flourish and come to fruition. While it may be difficult to write, please revisit this story and continue it. Thanks.
Dayli Ferran chapter 1 . 2/3/2016
When will this be updated?
iheartpickles chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
YAYAYAYAYAY PREYNA AND PERZOE ARE THE BESTTTT
joealexander167 chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
I will be completely honest. I loved it. Amazingly well written with a fascinating story. Hope to hear from you soon.
The Maiden chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
I saw something like this in an anime called The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya. I'm not saying that you stole the idea, but you used it in a different way. I really like this and I do hope that you will continue soon, but please; take all the time you need. I've seen many fanfictions go bad because the author was rushing to update for his/her fans. Update when you think is the right time, please.
Overall, keep up the good work! I look forward to reading this story in the future. It has the potential to be something much greater than a fanfiction.
Signing off,
The Maiden of Indifference
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Duskrend14 chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
I've wanted to write a story like this with all these time loops and whatnot for a while ever since I saw Steins;Gate. I'm much too busy for that- though i'm happy to see someone else doing it.

This was really good, by the way.

'Will be looking forward to this story.

Followed, Favorited.

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Blond Dude 42 chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
This is straight out of an LN I've read. But this is fanfiction where you are kinda supposed to do that so nothing wrong there. I must say that I'm curious why you made certain changes to the plot. But those will make this more interesting. Like it being jars (it was boxes in the translation I read). I never liked the use of box.

I'll refrain from posting the LN equivalent conclusion here since it might spoil the story for anyone who reads reviews.

Also this is well written for English not being your native language.
Yaw6113 chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
PraetorFable chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
Woah, amazing first chapter. And I don't know if you were going to stick with Percy liking Piper. But PLEASE do! It is my favorite pairing and I would love another Percy/Piper fic
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
14.3 years this loop has continued as of the latest iteration.
Lelouch95 chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
This brought back the memory of watching steins;gate, the girl who leapt through time and edge of tomorrow.
Kangh chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
This is a really unique (and confusing) story, keep it up!
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