Reviews for Kitty kitty |
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sassykitten1701 chapter 1 . 5/9/2016 Damn I could see you continuing this and making it a fun short story series |
shaded-blue-fangs chapter 1 . 12/15/2015 super cute! 3 |
Usweasil chapter 1 . 12/8/2015 Hahaha! That was a pretty good story! Wouldn't mind seeing more! A few things though, some of your grammar was a little off and some of your descriptions like the apartment kinda threw off the flow of the story. |
Oceania The Otaku chapter 1 . 12/8/2015 Amazing utterly amazing there are no words for what you just wrote. Please make a part 2 for this or I will be devastated. |
QueenDisney chapter 1 . 12/7/2015 You did great writing the love making scene :) Though I would want to correct you on something if you don't mind... The sentence ' She leaned down and peaked him on the lips.' is supposed to be 'She leaned down and pecked him on the lips.' That's what I assume... Hope you weren't offended |
Mskumiko24 chapter 1 . 12/7/2015 Really like this story, would be nice for it to continue. |