Reviews for Demonic Retribution
Sage of Wind Dragons chapter 1 . 3/1/2018
im reminded of the first pokemon movie.
we tried to create the most powerful pokemon of all time, and we SUCSEDDED. but with HORROR.

but YES go my awesome Homura chan! all hail devil empress of dommie doom!
but the yes dgood and evil DO exist..
heonstly thought. life and death EXISTS why are the "logicals" trying to deny that all thigns come to an end? hmm? bah stupid evil mascots.
williamcll chapter 1 . 10/23/2017
Pretty good, I hope you can continue this.
Nadh Daezskey chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
(I forgot to include... well, this...)

But i am so not sorry that Kyubey gained terrible curses/emotions as a punishment and that they feared the Devil's working. Though I absolutely have no idea if the incubator deserved this or not so i won't talk. Just cuz he's my sec fab fav character... Grr. He still made the girls suffer (even though it's without his conscious knowledge) and so... well, you go Homura! Just don't...beat him with any more unnecessary force and such...He's a character too, unfortunate that he took the role to cruelly remind the girls of the dark reality.

In this case, also to remind their own species that they shouldn't mess with something that size was beyond their paws. Incubators, a part of the species of universe that has a life of their own-so, villain or not, he got my condolences. c:

Just that his evil gauge did not reach the maximum level... of yet.

Sigh, whatever. I am troubled... Many people adored their favourite characters, what about Kyubey being mine? Y'know? Won't think about it because i love this monologue. Shet.
arsone chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
Might as well be my EXACT thought about the Incubator post-Rebellion. Well, i never did hate the incubators to begin with. I never hate him, actually, the opposite. He's cute and smart. I'd go out with him and he's going to be my date.

Pshh... Just kidding. About the boyfriend and all, it's just that, the incubators are a non-sentient being. How in fuck's world would they understand a complex being that was human (or the dichotomy of human's concepts... idonteven-) but to only theorize? Hm.

Anyway, i love this! I'll read this all over again if i have the time so i could further indulge myself in this wonderful Kyubey fic. Pssst. He's my favourite character, trailed second only to Homura. /winks
Quathis chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
It seems the Kyubei realized too late that they had already been infected with pride. Slowly and steadily poisoning them to the emotions of the girls. Now they reap what they sowed in giving kids power. They exemplify "curiosity killed the cat" and they will not be getting any satisfaction from their situation. Until next time.
deathleader chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
Wow, love the insight into the mind of a 'Certain' Incubator that shan't be named...

You are teaching them that universal 'Good' and 'Evil' do exist...

But what make me tremble with joy is that you make them truly suffer whats it like to have emotions... 'Divine' or in this case Demonic Punishment indeed...
werd me chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
Well... shit, you've actually made me feel bad for him and that's something I never really thought would happen.