Reviews for The Rise of Darth Veneficus
TheNoodleMaster14 chapter 64 . 5/30
PureAphelion, just because you don't understand a story, doesn't mean that it is terrible. That is a fault of your own if you don't take the time and READ it. You cannot complain that the online takes place somewhere different that you like. It is fanfiction, the author can write in whatever time they want. If you don't like it, don't read it and flame it to possibly deter those who would enjoy this story.
PureAphelion chapter 64 . 3/6
This story is shit I skipped to the end and it still felt long holy shit what actual hot fucking garbage. Ur plot is slower than one piece, and that’s really something. Fix ur pacing... and the concept is shit I don’t wanna have to look up a bunch of fucking names set the damn timeline 800 yrs forward u idiot.
Sanders7201 chapter 18 . 7/30/2019
thought the disciple that was caught was a female .
omh666 chapter 10 . 11/21/2018
(... "And tell us, about her old Head of House and his brilliance, Knight Luna has…" Yoda commented, smiling. The older man looked touched at the words, and ...)
She wasn't in Ravenclaw though.
Father Chaos chapter 35 . 11/16/2018
God, Gor-lak is like my favorite character so far. Colin and Harrys Master were genuinely my favorites, but considering the circumstances... Harry is aldight as well ig, but hes so... Typical. His side doesnt even seem grey at all, doesnt serve to make us question if hes good or evil, if hes justified. No, hes just acting like a typical villain (Monologues, Letting people escape brcuz its somehow susposed to help with a gamble, etc) in a typical evil empire. Its just.. Like, itd be alot more interesting if more people were genuinely loyal, and the empire at least seemed decent to the outsiders where they would question the morality of attacking an "innocent" faction.
Father Chaos chapter 23 . 11/15/2018
Bah, Harry seems to not be able to keep his control over any of his magical assets.. Like.. Ever. They always end up escaping, and sure he may get them in the end due to him conquerung the galaxy (the fact that this is complete and theres a third, with the thirds summary, is spoilers enough), but uts still annoying to sed it happen
raven chapter 64 . 8/22/2018
It was fun as long as it lasted good job
Yakashama chapter 65 . 8/21/2018
This is the best fanfic I have ever read, hands down. Although waiting for each chapter riddled with cliff hangers from multiple viewpoints was a chore, reading it again as a whole has been nothing short of amazing. I do have two questions. One: was it ever a possibility that Anguis would be the apprentice of Veneficus? And two: was Leon always destined to die? And again, this is an amazing story. Thanks for making it
Dees321 chapter 64 . 5/9/2018
That ending...
Dees321 chapter 63 . 5/9/2018
This whole chapter and its plethora of different Jedi and Sith facing off against each other is simply beautiful.
Dees321 chapter 62 . 5/9/2018
RIP Anguis - from spoiled brat to dark adept to Chancellor, you've come a long way-
Dees321 chapter 61 . 5/9/2018
Greattttt! Annihilate the Republic! Yes, yes.
Dees321 chapter 60 . 5/9/2018
I have been busy for a while, but coming back and seeing how things are progressing just blows my mind!
Guest chapter 64 . 5/7/2018
ugh, there will be a 3rd book? sorry boy, your story is tiring to read, i can already imagine it will be stretching a long winded chapters, and its often filled with nonsense.. especially now with this new shit (no, i'm not misspelled it) lord at the end.. well whatever, goodluck with your third book. For me, I will pretend the story ends here without any new rival shit lord and bellatrix drove her ship into a star..
jc chapter 64 . 5/5/2018
excellent work, i thought for sure bella was gonna end up killing herself and ven.
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