Who's the father unless it was artificial cloning shit

The food fight happened because people wanted to see who would win a fight, RWBY or JNPR. The food fight was a good way to not have them fight in the tournament or because of an actual conflict between them.

About Laura's bone, they aren't covered in metal. There was one comic that a woman with a chainsaw cut off an arm on Laura just recovered the claws to return them in the new arm.

Laura is a tsundere XD

It is good, you done well with this fanfic.

sigh another crossover with the same plot and just a character slapped inbetween

yeah laura doesnt cry out in pain unless her limbs are being crushed to paste or something like that. we are talking about a girl who is trained from a very young age to fight no matter what even if her body is being filled with bullets so a little cut wont fase her

it reads like a fasion show, and this young lady wears this dress for this occasion she also wears these special shoes and her hair is done in ... this style.
really weird even if you changed in which tense you write

i dont trust you thus is want you to join beacon. uhh sure.
yes because i am a headmaster thus your human rights mean nothing to me so prove it or else.
i kinda understand her willing to do this seeing as xavier wasnt all that different but it still bugs me how every fanfic just accepts ozpin as some kind of high ruler who determents everything

... WHAT? I now possess much confusion.

Also, I've been enjoying this, even if X-23 is a little OCC, it works well in the RWBY universe.

Kinda hate the fact that you had to do a relationship why can't we just have a genuinely good story for once somewhere in fanfiction .net without falling on tired cliche's and "shipping"

ehh not bad, chapters are a little short, I mean I am not really digging Laura having an aura as she doesn't really need it unless it like enhances her speed which might be useful otherwise its not really useful to someone like her

Isn't that healing time pretty slow?

*rubs forhead* ok I know... I KNOW. That these kind of chapters are difficult to do justice. They are emotional and serious and heavy and that is DIFFICULT. But this could have been done better.

I’m angrily twitching more than a little over the content of this particular update but I also want to point out you seem to have a lot of tense issues in your writing. Usually outside of dialougue everything is done in past tense. I know it’s weird and it trips me up more than almost anything else so I’ve sort of had to get good at spotting them lately.