I really like it ven if absorbing Archer incapacitated Shirou big part of the grail war. It wasn’t better until Archer disappear so that part was tough but in reality mistakes happens all the time, so is normal than when they more need it Shirou and Archer get knock out of the game almost until the last battle that almost killed Shirou.

But i like character development your Shirou and how He Sakura and Rin get their happy ending.

I would love to see their kids, why they don’t have any?

This story is like bacon and pierogi, it just works.

Technically E rank is 10 times better than the average human and shirou doesn't know that term at this point in his life, so it doesn't fit as a description there.

Shirou, Rin, and Sakura*
you have it as Shirou, Rin, and *Tohsaka*

It was a GREAT story!
I loved it!

Thank you very much!
~ Paxloria

I really REALLY don't think it's possible for Rider to use "Bellephoron" inside Illya's castle, no matter how big the main hall is. That's an attack that HAS to be used outside from the sky with plenty of distance to build up speed & momentum so that it can hit with all the might of a fallen star/meteor.

Author, I'm Going to have to agree with Rin.
By this point everyone is VERY close with each other, so isn't it strange to keep on refuring to Rin as Tohsaka instead of by her first name?
It's even caused errors.
I think this is the second time you wrote "Tohsaka and Rin" instead of "Sakura and Rin".

It makes sense that someone with the origin "Inscribe" would feel comfortable training someone so close to "Sword".

I really enjoyed this story. Both the slight adjustments and the fact it never really went too crazy and into the realm of deus ex machina even if the last archer battle against Gilgamesh was close. I'm also personally still unsure if Archer's UBW can actually still beat Gilgamesh if he already has pulled out Ea since Ea is still a planet buster that should be able to obliterate the realm the reality marble is contained in.

I did like this story a lot especially the small omake like inserts of the other characters etc.

I'm eager to see what your other stories are like.

Not a bad story.

Sequel drop, lets go.

Damn, I totally hate the Association. They should all be killed.
Killed that Lorelei b*tch

I'm very glad that this finally got a finish! Such a good story! Not as long as I would like, but you are a very talented writer!

They need Noble Phantasms? Isn't there a handful of swords and such in the Fuyuki River from when 'Ol Gil fired them off in the last War?

whenever i hear the phrase "precious people," it sounds so wierd. why not say "people close to you?" or something along those lines