Reviews for Renewal
YuukiAsuna41 chapter 79 . 7/9
I read it again xD After re-read I start love Leonis personality eventhough I wish you will make him more look like a child. Don't have mind about this, thank you for this story!
Just another other weirdo chapter 65 . 6/6
Dude I am crying, I really loved the elder black
Just another other weirdo chapter 56 . 6/6
Andromeda talking to Corine is me trying to explain that I'm gay
Just another other weirdo chapter 26 . 6/6
Albus is gay women ain't his weakness
Just another other weirdo chapter 7 . 6/6
the last paragraph really got me
YuukiAsuna41 chapter 79 . 5/25
What must I say after read 79 chapters? Wow, this is really amazing and I can't wait about what happen in next.
Calmzone1 chapter 69 . 5/16
This is a fabulous chapter for Percy. So often he is represented as a stick in the mud. Great job. I lost track of this story, so I am glad to have had the opportunity to start over from the beginning.

Hope you are doing well and not too touched by the pandemic. Stay safe.
stevem1 chapter 79 . 5/8
This is very well written. It’s essentially 1 part Harry Potter AU, 1 part Pride and Prejudice, and 2 parts day time soap opera.

I have one major critique and that’s the Black’s sending the entirety of their future into the hands of a man (Dumbledore) that they don’t trust. It’s insane.

Though FanFiction author after FanFiction author does the same thing. A wizard or witch distrust Dumbledore but then promptly sends their children into their care.

Regardless, the rest is very good.
Guest chapter 20 . 5/6
ah hell yeah marius

for all that i saw those two getting together, marius coming out with it just like that is really fuckin funny to me
CosmicCaiti chapter 79 . 5/8
I really enjoy this story! It was fun to get a Harry update, we haven't seen that in a while. Are Harry, Dudley, and Hermione still very close friends?

Good luck with your move!
stevem1 chapter 8 . 5/8
James Potter and especially Sirius Black cement their positions as toe-rags in this chapter. And it’s believable.
Guest chapter 79 . 5/3
Like Harry classes. Glad history of magic is being taught by someone living.
Mel72000 chapter 79 . 5/4
Thank you very much for this great chapter !
Jaxsprat chapter 79 . 5/3
This is a wonderful story and an amazing world that you have created! Thank you for all of your effort and work that you put in for our entertainment. I hope your move goes well and will be excitedly waiting for the next installment whenever you have the time and energy.
IWantColouredRain chapter 79 . 5/3
Oh, that's a shame that you're going on hiatus. Hopefully it won't last too long. So, no forbidden corridor then? Harry should warn his aunts and uncles about the curse scar. He's been raised in a loving home in this 'verse, so he should be able to turn to them if he needs help.
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