what about the guns that haseo wields in his xth form alongside the scythe that you gave him.

A suggestion, dont add notes into the story itself. It ruins the flow. Save them for the end of the chapter.

If you rewrite, keep haseo as haseo. Not the demon berserker haseo.
That's mean, start from the beginning when he is still in signal. An innocent teenager that just want to enjoy the world and be an adventurer just like everyone else(pre got hack GU SORA and pre taillight brigade personality)

If you can add in the novel or the movie element, it will be great.

whyyyy nooot?

it could be interesting, but you would need to find a way to tie them into the lore though. i think you missed one chance though. you could have made the emerald forest part of Coite-Bodher Battlefield.

hmm thingss happenddd

nice place to end it

Ovan has perfect timing

that was a good fight

the chainsaw blade is badass

I know. I hope she doesn't meet the same fate in this fic. Am I the only one that thinks the hag with black eyes that was revealed is based on the Witched Witch of the West?

endrance

what just happend why it suddenly became so short

we need more of this fucking amazing story