Reviews for Forgotten Akari |
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RoseBloodmane chapter 5 . 7/11/2017 Lol Chinatsu is so stupid to forget such a thing if you ask me. Anyways I enjoyed reading this. Can't wait to see the other's faces when they finally remember her. |
Tired Paisano chapter 5 . 5/23/2017 Oh my! Bless the loli gods, there is an update! Great chapter, I loved every second of it. |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/11/2016 Gracias por actualisar |
JJ.Docx chapter 1 . 7/12/2016 OMG! |
OtakuOne chapter 3 . 1/30/2016 Wooo.. Good story, make more! |
YuriChan220 chapter 3 . 1/19/2016 What a nice sleepover between Akari and Rise~! You've written it very well and writing Rise's favorite things is really fun to read~! And I wonder if Yui and the others will realize that they've forgotten someone important. Great chapter so far! Sorry for the super late review! See you in the next chapter! |
Anony chapter 2 . 12/22/2015 Nice! I always like Fics featuring these two. Update soon |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/21/2015 Why does the teacher use -chan with Chinatsu and -san with the other students? lol Glad to see you'll be continuing with frequent updates. I like that you haven't given Rise any dialogue, even though Akari can hear her. I think it's awkward when writers actually give her lines, probably because there's no voice to mentally read it in. Looking forward to more! |
YuriChan220 chapter 2 . 12/21/2015 Oh, my goodness! Rise appears! That's just what I was hoping for! And gosh, I love the interactions between them! And the dialogue, too! Oh! I also love how you called Rise "Rise-chan". That's what I did, too! Oh, I hope there's more! This is getting really interesting! Be sure to read some of my Rise fanfics, some time, maybe to get inspired. See you next chapter~ |
Xpparda chapter 2 . 12/20/2015 Wow this is getting interesting, first I thought it just was a misunderstanding but now Akari is really invisible, thank god Rise is there. What will happen at their sleepover? I can't wait... Please update soon. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2015 I don't know if I should be impressed by the fact that your introductory chapter is a mere 500 words, but it really does do well to set the story off. Here's hoping this won't be another half-page intro that never gets continued and withers into the abyss of the archives. Also, I didn't care for the way you called out the perspective change - maybe just add a horizontal line, or nothing at all, and let it flow naturally. Other than that, your writing is lovely! Needs more content! Keep going! |
NatsuFuyu chapter 1 . 12/17/2015 The writing style is pretty good, but as of yet this is way too short to really say anything about it. |
YuriChan220 chapter 1 . 12/15/2015 Oh, no! This is a really sad fic! I want to see what happens next! It's getting really interesting. So, everyone is forgetting poor Akari because of her lack of presence, huh? That's so sad! So, I wonder what Akari is going to do? And I wonder who that someone will be...Rise Matsumoto perhaps? I'm really hoping for that to happen! See you next chapter~! |