Reviews for Forgotten Akari
RoseBloodmane chapter 5 . 7/11/2017
Lol Chinatsu is so stupid to forget such a thing if you ask me. Anyways I enjoyed reading this. Can't wait to see the other's faces when they finally remember her.
Tired Paisano chapter 5 . 5/23/2017
Oh my! Bless the loli gods, there is an update! Great chapter, I loved every second of it.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/11/2016
Gracias por actualisar
JJ.Docx chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
OMG!
OtakuOne chapter 3 . 1/30/2016
Wooo.. Good story, make more!
YuriChan220 chapter 3 . 1/19/2016
What a nice sleepover between Akari and Rise~! You've written it very well and writing Rise's favorite things is really fun to read~! And I wonder if Yui and the others will realize that they've forgotten someone important.

Great chapter so far! Sorry for the super late review! See you in the next chapter!
Anony chapter 2 . 12/22/2015
Nice! I always like Fics featuring these two. Update soon
Guest chapter 2 . 12/21/2015
Why does the teacher use -chan with Chinatsu and -san with the other students? lol

Glad to see you'll be continuing with frequent updates. I like that you haven't given Rise any dialogue, even though Akari can hear her. I think it's awkward when writers actually give her lines, probably because there's no voice to mentally read it in. Looking forward to more!
YuriChan220 chapter 2 . 12/21/2015
Oh, my goodness! Rise appears! That's just what I was hoping for! And gosh, I love the interactions between them! And the dialogue, too! Oh! I also love how you called Rise "Rise-chan". That's what I did, too!

Oh, I hope there's more! This is getting really interesting! Be sure to read some of my Rise fanfics, some time, maybe to get inspired. See you next chapter~
Xpparda chapter 2 . 12/20/2015
Wow this is getting interesting, first I thought it just was a misunderstanding but now Akari is really invisible, thank god Rise is there. What will happen at their sleepover? I can't wait... Please update soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
I don't know if I should be impressed by the fact that your introductory chapter is a mere 500 words, but it really does do well to set the story off. Here's hoping this won't be another half-page intro that never gets continued and withers into the abyss of the archives. Also, I didn't care for the way you called out the perspective change - maybe just add a horizontal line, or nothing at all, and let it flow naturally. Other than that, your writing is lovely!

Needs more content! Keep going!
NatsuFuyu chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
The writing style is pretty good, but as of yet this is way too short to really say anything about it.
YuriChan220 chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
Oh, no! This is a really sad fic! I want to see what happens next! It's getting really interesting. So, everyone is forgetting poor Akari because of her lack of presence, huh? That's so sad!

So, I wonder what Akari is going to do? And I wonder who that someone will be...Rise Matsumoto perhaps? I'm really hoping for that to happen!

See you next chapter~!