Loved it ️

The OC is called Erica a couple of times in this chapter.

You realize she's an overpowered mary-sue, right? Try giving her some flaws and some personality, because right now she's as interesting as a dead goldfish. She also seems very shallow and uncaring, so I urge you to give her some life.

You seem to be a bit mixed up in this chapter. You keep switching between calling Will's sister Hayden and Erica.

LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

so as I'm reading this, you say dragonfly wings, everytime you mention Hayden's, it's not super distracting but I notice it everytime. but I'm only on chapter 7. But for next time you use a specific type of anything, you don't have to mention it everytime you speak about it. Other than that fantastic story!

Loved it.

LOVED IT! Best Disney movie ever

I don't have to read this to know that it's a Mary-Sue. I imagine she is beautiful and perfect.

I know hmi have been ghosting on this story for forever, but I just wanted to say that I loved the ending! :') LOOK AT THAT HAPPY TEAR!

Hayden's name changes to Erica near the beginning.

no dragon wings that's fstupid

I really liked this maybe next chapter we can see it in Lash's point of view:3 haha I'm excited to see how this story is going to end

love it. update soon

I'm so glad you updated in really enjoying this! Gah and I love protective Lash it's really cute!

Pumped for your next update:3!