Sighs* ya know I’ve had this tab open for months? Dunno when I stopped reading. I know I stopped because the long time between updates kept forcing me to go back and reread and I was tired of that. Still, shame it seems pretty seriously dead it was one of the best RWBY fics I’ve seen. Going to have to check what else you’ve written since.

My mans turned RWBY into JWYN

AYO MAIDEN JAUNE

This is one of the only RWBY stories I've seen with jaune actually being in a hunter academy and apparently he is still kinda the same... But he makes little to no effort in trying to rectify this? I mean he is actually in a huntsmen academy this time I feel like he should be at least slightly better then his Canon self but no apparently that is too much to ask for... Until he gets the informative journal... Maybe that will help out?

Dam Neo beating Phyraa was not expected but perhaps could be something with the jump Neo got on her her sembelance being confusing to deal with at first.

I liked the story overall. Was rlly suprised at how easy it was for Jaune to climb up the ranks, Im suprsied Ozpin cares about Blood loyaltly and making amends for Summer through Jaune becoming aware of the true situation.

I understand motivation being a problem for people. It is for me. Sucks that ur writing ceased for 2 years now. I hope you do return or better yet find a stable and strong motivation to continue writing. AS ur last writing motivation didnt seem to go well, nor did the one before that.

Yang and Jaune being a thing was surpsing but its nice! Trhe blond duo kicking ass. Love the art.
Hard to comphrened how the weapons look like. The pistol in the beautiful picture of the story was not what I thought the pistol looked like. Also I reccomend u make it so that all the weapons folds just like ruby's does so its easier for jaune to carry around without looking like hes carrying an entire army's worth of equipment on him.

Love the story, hope it comes back, hope you are doing well.
Take care!

The Port scene at the begining was hilarious
Very cute ending

I dont understand what Yang specfically has a problem with Jaune's onsie. Its hinted/teased there may be sexual tension or something?

I really wish you gave us visual designs of the weapons jaune has

The dad wising up and seeing how perhaps the classic sword is no longer a thing that hunters and huntress can rely on alone in such a now advacned wolrd was a smart descision

I cant believe the smut book is Fate stay night

shame this wasn't continued!

here's to joyous reunions!

I was wondering how you would make the little sister relevant to the main plot...

when in doubt, pull a magneto

penny and noras interactions are great, and it should be cool to see how the family reacts to the "hey we have a cousin" thing