Reviews for Potter Files : The Sea of Monsters
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 7 . 10/25/2019
Giving Sirius a son relatively ruined this story for me. Why would you even do that? Otherwise it was great.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2018
As future Moon Goddess or whatever maybe she can get a type of oath from the were's in exchange for a painless transformation? Like they become her full moon 'Hunters' and help destroy monsters in whatever country they live in? Form their own packs with her being their 'Alpha'?
Robby the Cyber Warrior chapter 5 . 4/2/2018
I love Hestia so much! She never seems to get enough love and credit, so I'm happy to see her get some recognition
twilightmoon90 chapter 7 . 2/24/2017
keep me updated
toile grant chapter 7 . 9/21/2016
good
naturefire chapter 9 . 9/2/2016
Wonderful! A truly enjoyable series.
PikaMew1288 chapter 9 . 8/30/2016
You do realize that The Titan's Curse happens the week before the Winter Solstice directly after The Sea Of Monsters? The Title should be Sea of Monsters & The Titan's Curse unless you plan on cutting the Goblet of Fire into two parts with the beginning in The Sea of Monsters and the end in The Titan's Curse.
Cacti Clam Sam chapter 9 . 8/30/2016
Is Iris ending up with Percy?
I want her to.

But in the (unlikely?) case she isn't, can she end up with Nico di Angelo?

I find Nico to be the cutest thing before his sister dies and wouldn't it be funny for him to have a crush on Iris?

Oh no!

Now I have to pick an OTP for this fanfic now!

If you can't say outright what the pairings will be, can you give some hints in your next chapter?

Love the story,

PokéMANS
PikaMew1288 chapter 6 . 8/30/2016
You are aware that children and Legacies of Iris have free Iris-Messaging anywhere along with the ability to summon Rainbows anywhere for said messages right? All Iris Jr. had to do was pray to Iris Sr. for the message to go through and they would have gotten it for free. ALL Demigods and Legacies get SOME form of their godly Ancestors power.
Anna chapter 9 . 8/29/2016
Brilliant! I like the changes you are making!
amerdism chapter 8 . 8/29/2016
Can I enquirer as to an updated description of Iris for her current looks, I know she's short but how short in comparison to her peers school like herimone and Neville, I don't know their heights either but it'd be helpful to have a rough estimisation, also hair length and bust size, I assume she's rather petite but like I said, an updated description would be helpful, as well as any new major appearance changes like scars.
amerdism chapter 9 . 8/29/2016
I'm a bit confused, Iris says she doesn't have familial bonds and that's true for the most part, she sees her cousins as friends more than family which is normal among demigods and she doesn't know her godly relatives well enough to call them family, but she has called two blood relatives family even if she didn't realise it, those to are Apollo, when she called him uncle, and her mother Artemis, whom she usually calls mom or another such word meaning mother, not to mention she comes of as having a mother daughter relationship with Artemis and more or less admits to it every time she calls Artemis her mother, so I'd like some help understanding because I'm confused, does Iris mean she can't form a familial connection with only her human relatives or what?
jmartinez8089 chapter 9 . 8/29/2016
Are you planning on adding The Titan's Curse to this story since it would start about a week before the Yule Ball or are you going to end this story when it reaches that point and start a new one?
harryislife chapter 9 . 8/29/2016
Good update, totally agree with you about Hermione and the time turners, although I did have one issue.

"Maybe, the Irish were particularly self conscious about their cleanliness when they were not busy getting drunk."

I don't think you meant this badly, but as an Irish person I hate when people use these sorts of stereotypes. Yes people in Ireland enjoy their drink, but we're not always drunk or or all alcoholics. Is that really the only comment people can make about our culture? There's an awful lot more to Ireland than alcohol. It's basically like me saying that all Americans live on burgers and dunkin donuts. It's just incorrect, offensive and unnecessary.

I really like this fic, and this update, it's just this one sentence I have an issue with, because that's one of my biggest peeves in fanfiction and in general.
LadyScatty chapter 9 . 8/29/2016
I'm muslim and not offended, as always I loved your chapter even thought I miss Percy and wish to see Iris interact with more people. I love the things you changed and I can't wait to read more :)
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