Overall, I really liked this story. It had very good description and imagery. But what kinda bothered me was some grammar issues 'Inusasha', the speed of the story (I felt that it could've been a bit longer and a more developed romance plot), and InuYasha and Kikyo seemed a tad bit off of character. InuYasha seemed TOO kind. Again I enjoyed the story. Keep writing to your hearts content!

The Prologue really intrigued me. The "I do not own InuYasha joke" was HILARIOUS! LOL

i liked it hope you update soon

I thought Inu-no-taisho was lord of the west, not the east

this is amazing please keep writing can't wait for the next chapter

What already young love that was fast very interesting
Please keep writing