Reviews for Laying Down the Sand |
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![]() ![]() Awesome story ! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was 1 wild ride! Wonderful ending. I loved every moment of han and leia and you did an amazing job with all the characters, as well as really creating a well-developed O.C. totally enjoyed the ride! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was absolutely beautiful. The perfect ending to their story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh thank the maker! i was hoping they would end up in bed together, even if it was just to sleep. i feel better now :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this really confused me. i'm not sure what leia was trying to communicate but i would really like to know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have been hoping, through this whole story, that leia would not have to find out what exactly happened between han and maranya. she handled it better than i expected. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want Han to tell leia he loves her! I just love their moments together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was so moving. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i LOVE the timing leia's admission! poor han :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the part about han's head not knowing why or what his heart is doing! perfection! the whole maranya storyline, especially this chapter, deals with some very serious issues. very well done. this really is what one would expect to happen to her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was intense between han and maranya. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely conversation in the speeder. I'm happy mon wants Leia to be happy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He knows his princess so well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Poor leia. I'm happy han will comfort her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter made me so mad! but that's a good thing because it means your story makes me feel and care and that is what makes me want to read it. when leia stood up i wanted to clap! her speech was so moving, especially when she revealed what had been done to her on the death star. this chapter was long? i hadn't notice, i was too enthralled. |