Hola!
Ayer comencé a leer esta historia y hasta el momento ha sido genial!
Me sentí casi como Bulma cuando vio a Vegeta por primera vez jajajaa Además me gusta la originalidad de la trama de la historia!
Seguiré leyendo ahora, pero no podía evitar dejar un comentario
Saludos, espero tengas un gran año 2020! :D

Awesome

haaa Frieza

wtfff it says rated m of course rated m on is allowed it

this is just great...I love it

I really love this story

I just came across this story and it was great

I was a bit disappointed in the ending! Was really hoping for the reunion of Bulma with her parents as well as one more love session with her and Vegeta ;) having Maron/Frieza be the last love session of the story just left a bad taste in my mouth! Truly hope you make a sequel!

What an epic storyline! I couldn't stop reading, it was so intense and fascinating! You had great ideas and I saw everything vividly in front of my eyes. I wish there could be a sequel about who he plans on holding the throne and being a student on earth. Pleeeeease? :D

you've never rode a motorcycle huh, there's no E brake

I really do this story while they were on earth that is... the story went down the drain after they left the earth...nice try by the way. Maybe it will be a good idea if you write a sequel

Wow this is such a nice ending. Vegeta goes back to earth with Bulma. I still can't get over the fact that this story is ended. This is one of the best vegebul fictions I've read so far and I love it very much. I think it deserves to have a sequel. Please write a sequel of love hate and magic. Please pretty pleass

Epilogue?

I'm so glad that Vegeta was the one to kill Frieza. Now since Vegeta's going back to Earth with Bulma, who will take control of Vegeta-sei in his absence? Maybe Bardock can do it. I dunno maybe if you happen to do a sequel then that could be discussed.

I don't believe it's over I enjoyed this fic do much I waited for years and finely I think I we
Ill read it over for.e the beginning without stopping and what's next