i don't care if it's cliched, its so cute! aaah im dying! i love your works.

i love it! i like cliche' and fluffy stories bring on the cheesy ones too i like the ones that make me giggle
yay takari!

I love how this story full of fluff and sweetness! I just noticed that you keep calling them on two names such as Takeru or TK and Hikari or Kari, better if you stick on one name hehe just my suggestion... :) and the kissing part good however the follow up part is somehow exaggerated? Lol anyway, all in all, this story is good and Thank you for it!

Yes, very fluffy, and also very satisfying. A lovely little fan-fiction. Thanks for writing! Hope to see more from you!

nice work

I can agree it's fluffy! but sometimes it weirds me whenever I read a story about them kissing to show that they love each other... forget it lol. Good job!

Oh my goodness ~ this was so perfect! I don't care that it was cliché, I feel like it is something that really would happen with T.K. and Kari! They've known each other for so long at this point that them both admitting their love wouldn't be unnatural at al, even if it was only their first kiss.

Okay, two stories of yours in a row with great first kissing scenes :)

And despite being cliched, it was wonderfully fluffy and a good fun read. Nice to see more from you, especially since there normally is quite a big wait between chapters.

Oh my gosh i'm dying-! That was so cute it melts my brain XD

Err so yea, I can't write anything because my brain just melted

That was so adorable. This couple can just make me squee faster than any other I swear.

I was just grinning like a maniac the entire time I was reading, I swear.