Well this was interesting another cool chapter hope it gets updated soon

Well this was interesting if not confusing but it seems this is the sequel so I'll have to read that first I think

interesting story

Nice to see this story returning and with such a great chapter no less
Keep up the good work

Welcome back, and hoping you get to make more of this story.

excellent work on this chapter and welcome back and good luck :)

that was good keep the chapters coming

Well, nice work on making the arc a bit more original, although you still have to clear some things up from part one. Anyway, be interesting to see what Tsunade is dealing with back in Konoha, mainly with the elders trying to muscle into things that they shouldn't be in.

awesome work on this chapter good to see you working on this again :)

that was great keep the chapters coming

Well, one way to start a sequel, and looking forward to see if Naruto gets to bring down the bad elements of the village, and wondering if Hinata and Sakura got to take a few down themselves, especially if anybody is dumb enough to try and do something to them just because they are with Naruto, only to be taken out instead, and the law would be on the girls' side. Also curious, will it just be Naruto, Hinata and Sakura together, or will, say, Shion, Yakumo, anybody that gets helped by Naruto, and want's to have what his main pair has. Oh, and by the way, in part one, the last lemon before the ending, you made it seem like Hinata and Sakura were impregnated, so if they weren't might want to explain what happened.

this is off to a good start :)