Reviews for Slow Burn |
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2019 loved it :) |
SinTotchi chapter 5 . 5/1/2018 Great job on this! I read all 5 chapters back to back, and I definitely think you've done a wonderful job with your writing. The previous chapters did have a lot of adjectives, and sometimes it could be a lot to follow, but I was able to manage without much issue. This last chapter was the best, your writing flowed so well and I didn't have to pause to reread anything at all, LOL, so that was definitely a plus! Regardless, though, your style is so descriptive and I wouldn't want to change that at all, I'd rather have "too much" than none at all. One of the best and best-written Reylo fics I've read! I look forward to your next update! |
Amathyst Star chapter 5 . 4/29/2018 I like this story, please put out another update soon!:) |
Munro chapter 5 . 4/28/2018 So where’s chapter 6? P.s this is a great story! |
lucel18 chapter 5 . 4/10/2018 Oooooooh...i wonder if Ben will succeed. Thank you! |
lucel18 chapter 4 . 4/10/2018 Your characterization of these characters are on-point. Thank you! |
lucel18 chapter 3 . 4/10/2018 Eeeeeeeee! Love it! Lol! |
lucel18 chapter 2 . 4/10/2018 Nice AU idea here...Kylo defeating Rey in the forest and taking her captive again. Love the imagery in your writing |
lucel18 chapter 1 . 4/10/2018 Ooooohhh...interesting..Thank you! |
projektrevolutio chapter 5 . 3/31/2018 oh snap! that ending. You write very compellingly. Looking forward to more! |
reppad98 chapter 5 . 3/24/2018 So, when I saw an email alert for this story I had no clue where it had left off, so it was a good excuse to reread it XD Hm, Rey is having some mixed feelings. And as for your descriptions, I do agree that on rereading this it seemed to have a lot of flowery descriptions that slowed the flow of the story. I can see the changes in this chapter and it was easier to read, so well done :) Interesting that Kylo Ren got to see Rey's nightmare. Their bond allows unique interactions like these and it's probably good they have a bond like this, otherwise it would be difficult to have Kylo Ren show that he has more feelings than hate and anger. And of course Snoke would give Kylo Ren a chance to keep Rey, otherwise it would become hard for them to interact haha. But Rey will not be happy with this. I'm curious how this is going to develop. Thank you for updating (finally :D it's always so sad when stories aren't finished), I hope you update soon, and keep writing! ! |
Maags chapter 5 . 3/19/2018 Glad to see you resuming this story: looking forward to more. |
lasvegasskye chapter 1 . 3/19/2018 Nice start |
Hya chapter 4 . 2/22/2018 I love how you write! An inspiration for me. Kylo Ren is truly a difficult character and I saw him in this fanfiction. I loved it. |
anarchamoon chapter 4 . 2/19/2018 omg this is amazing. its exactly what i need. You are gonna get them to fall in love right? pls do! |