Loved it

a naked marie smirking at saying to her boyfriend a naked edd drain your seed into my pussy without a condom

I haven’t read many Ed edd and eddy fan fics but this one of the best they’ve read in a while the story is touching and I found my self wanted to read more and more of it. I also love the bitter sweet ending it just fits write the tone of the story. In short great job.

I know this might not be something you'd want to hear so I'll start off with a compliment; this story is wonderfully portrayed and I think you're an excellent writer. You've covered a topic, as you said, that isn't that well thought of or popular and turned it into a great story. Sadly, it is not the kind of story I am looking for in reading. I don't mean that in the sense that I'm looking for pure smut or action and none of the realistic qualities this story has, but it just merely isn't my forte. I hope to see you one day publish an actual book that I will look forward to reading. if not, well then i wish you the best of luck and a wonderful life.
- Johann (the Six String Bassist)

Hope you did your research on autism, this reviewer happens to be just that

A deep and simple end I'm sad it took so long but still happy you finished thank you.

Great chapter and nice conclusion. And don't worry about the long wait, everyone has their own lives and the fact that you make the effort to update even with all the things that you have going on in your life shows how much you care about your story's. Thanks for a great story and keep up the good work in your other story's.

Simply a masterpiece. THIS was a real story. It had feelings and reality, happiness and loneliness, it had love and hate and best of all it had EddXMarie.
In all seriousness now, this story was a rollercoaster of emotions for me, the way you wrote this story and how you pictured the characters and their lives was superb. I can't praise enough about how you actually made this seem more like a mature/sturdy/deep story than many others that only focus on the happy parts. You gave the characters genuine personalitys and situations that dont shy away from the real world and the harsh reality, and that is what contributes to making this story a masterpiece.

A fine, well-written story about an subject many still don't want to talk about. You don't have to be of a certain gender to be raped, nor does the attacker have to be of a certain gender. I did wonder about Double D not seeming to have considered any type of legal action, but that would be his decision.
One thing I noticed, if I'm reading the story correctly:
Chapter 12 - Propositions and Chapter 13 - Choppy Waters.
Is the material in these two chapters identical?

Again, fine work.

Many thanks for this, a joy to read and a firm favourite

I'm just waiting for Marie to put a one two on Nazz's face.

Dude, it's so true. People literally make jokes about men being raped. Its honestly ridiculous. Like, when someone says no, one should genuinely stop and ask 'like stop stop' you know what I mean. Also, does he not get up to pee? My thought this whole chapter

Kudos on the courage to write a fictional with a guy being raped. I am a female rape victim myself and I found a similar self loathing for a while even though I did not realize it was rape at the time. Thank you for bringing light to those who often are forgotten.

I liked it

I love it. It is almost a pity that it stopped, but to all good things an end.