very nice:)

OMG LOL that last line though. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Oh god this is way to adorable! I have absolutely no idea how this story has so little favorites, it is amazing! I always had a hard time figuring out Arthur and Alfred's feelings during the war, and I think this explained it really well. I love UsUk and I love your writing! Good job! Xoxo

Congratulations on finishing. It's so nice when an author completes their work. Thank you!

...the belly rub joke was cute. I guess Al really wanted Art's attention?

I am very much in love with this! Cant wait for you to continue.

It's nice that you try to tackle battle. Most authors have the character black out and wake up after the fight, but you challenge yourself and try to write it out. I respect that a lot. It's a tough task.

I hope your new job is going well. It's pretty rough getting words out in writing, but I always find you have to start somewhere. So I hope you'll keep up with your work :)

Congratulations on your job. And kudos on sticking with it. As you write it gets easier to come up with the words you need. I'm glad you are into this story. Best of luck.

(Nihonbara - sorry I often use a different computer than my account so that's why I'm signed out.)