This is a very interesting story! I don’t know why you’ve seemed to stop updating but I’d love to read more. Thanks for what you have written! I enjoyed it so far!

very intriguing story.

Great chapter! I like that you are continuing to tell Finn's, Poe's and Leia's stories rather than only focussing on Ren and Rey. Looking forward to the next instalment!

This should be the first turn of Rey turning dark, it should be her trying to stay good though similar to anakin but the dark overwhelms her.

I really appreciate the care you've taken with the storytelling here. I hope you continue with this piece. Thanks for sharing it!

Another wonderful chapter. I think you're doing an excellent job of keeping everyone in character. Also, stories like this can't be rushed, and you're not. Just take your time and take us on the ride.

I absolutely love this fic.
It has plot ;-)! And the small moments, for example between Luke & Leia give it so much more depth.
Thank you for sharing :-)

I enjoyed reading the conversation between Leia and Luke! I also can't wait to see what's up next!

Please write more soon! Really great! :)

I love your characterization of Ren and am curious to see where this is heading (and if you believe he can still be redeemed ;-))
Also love how you confronted Leia with her son and the angst and emotions that come with it. I really hope the film makers will include such a scene in one the movies.

I have absolutely loved reading this story. I've been reading the chapters as they've been coming out, but haven't had a chance to review until now. Your prose is absolutely lovely. I love your imagery and descriptions, and I can absolutely see the scenes in my mind. I love your dedication to Rey and Kylo Ren. They are strong and incredibly complex characters. You make them so real with their vulnerability. I'm so interested in their further interactions and conversations (I'm so ready for a slow burn story between these two. From what I've read so far, I can tell you earnestly care for these two, and I know you'll do these characters justice). Seriously, I am so looking forward to the next chapter and watching this story slowly unfold. Thank you so much for beginning this project! It makes my little reader's heart so pleased.

rey should free him

Fantastic story :)

I absolutely love this story so far. I think your pacing seems quite good. I really like the tension you've built as well. Please keep it up.

Wait! This is rated M? Opps. Good story! Wish I could finish this one, but I'm not allowed to read rated M material. *sigh*