Please say you will update soon...

Me gustó la historia y espero que cuando puedas actualizar, espero que demuestre que lo ama, ya que ambos son muy tercos.

please update soon.

Fantastic. I hope it's not abandoned.

Oh Kili! be still my beating heart.
I love that Bilbo is such a secret romantic. God forbid anyone should discover he had actual feelings other than huffiness and concern for his pantry. Can't wait for you to post more I ship this so hard. So cute when they eat together :,) keep it up!

I love when people write accents, when they don't I tend to just forget about them. I can never manage to pull it off myself but you've done a really good job. Two chapters in and I'm already ridiculously invested in this story

OOOH SHIT NOOO, I mean yes but also NOOO. Poor Bilbo, why are his friends always coming back from the dead? ~(sneaky Sherlock fan emerges)~

Poor man must be in tatters. I found the cross over between dialogue and exposition funny, especially since a trade mark of Bilbo's behaviour to never quite no what he wants
Write on!

Chapter two made me cry so much, like - just sobbing. (It was messy and gross and required many tissues) Your writing feels very natural. I especially like how you'll have them flollow a train of thought and not just monolog to themselves. Thankyou for writing this story, its wonderful. I look forward to future chapters.

hello,

I love your fic. I hope to read another chapter very soon.
All the best

Oh my god! You made me cry! But the good kind of crying!

That was wonderful - I look forward to more

I love this story! Especially since Thilbo is my main shipping (if my name doesn't give it away lol) and I can't wait to see the next chapter!

Great job with this!

Muwahahahahhahhhhhaa! Ooooh the internal struggle of Bilbo. This should be interesting.

I can imagine Bilbo slackjawed and looking at Thorin as if he is a ghost. You really need to tell me what happends next.