I figure this is abandoned anyway, but still, it's soooo hard to read. There's just so much rambling and running off onto odd tangents that have little to do with the plot points before and after these ramblings.

You also repeat yourself way too often. How many times do we need to know Connor was experimented on, near death, etc. when Naruto rescued him? How many times do you need to tell us all of Naruto's abilities, how strong he is, how he's constantly evolving new powers?

Not to mention there's no real personal interaction with any of the females mentioned so far, except a few brief conversations with Yasaka. We haven't even seen ONE conversation, onscreen, with the 3 Fallen ladies he's such good friends of.

the changing gender and ability to get pregnant creeps me out, that kinda shit is usually only included in fics where the author plans to eventually pair Naruto with a dude and get Naruto pregnant, otherwise, why include it?

Hope you return and update I have enjoyed this story

Ouch, sorry about your laptop dying on you. As for the beta part, if you don't have one, I'd like to to throw my name into the mix and the grammar is not all that bad compared to some stories I've read. Also when I leave reviews for stories, I will give a what is good and what is bad critique.

You are trying to do to much with Naruto and his abilities. Thumb it down

Stop it

Giorno Giovanna could fuck up Naruto

Cant wait for the next chapter
You kinda left it on a cliffhanger
Really want to know what's going to happen
Hope u please do continue this story if u have the time too
Thank u

And how do you feel if your wive become someone harem?

What with all author having someone wives as someone harem? Isn't that NTR? Isn't that disturbing?

There's a crap ton of errors in this. I'd also recommend at least explain his background a tiny bit versus telling us to check out a diff story in your author note. We clicked this story we don't want to open another one just to understand this one.

Please continue this it is awesome

Just started reading this for a week now as for the story build up it was well made. And I'm proud to say I'll be one of those that will wait for the next chapter of this to come out patiently at that keep up the great work.

Well youve had a year any chance of getting an update relativly soon

Great story a shame that you gave up on it.