I'm with that goal to expand Nali fic's.

This was AWESOME! I ship Nali so hard and it's so hard to find good fics about them! so happy to find awesome stories!

Thank you for the fic! It's pretty good! Hope for an update soon!

THIS IS SO ADORABLE! XD
I have to stop myself from laughing at Natsu's mistake because he was totally going to regret doing so! (giggles) At least he apologized at the end!
This was so sweet and cute! I love the idea of the Stauss family being a musical band together! They would totally rock the world!
Anyways, I love this story!
Hope to see more!
GOOD LUCK! XD

NOTE: To the NaLu shippers out there, until you find evidence of Lisanna being hateful to Lucy or something, all those cliche stories about Lisanna being jealous or hating Lucy causing her to be kicked out of Fairy Tail will known as unoriginal and bashing literature. I know in the fanfiction world, you can write anything you want but there is a limit of how childish one can be. In the anime/manga, Lucy and Lisanna are friends like close friends! So suck on that!

I LUV IT LUVITLUVITLUVITLUVITLUVIT ( you have no idea how hard it was to type that all together i have a habit to hit space i had to backspace so many times (;) anyway I LUV IT I AM SO FOR NALI MY FAV SHIP

I agree that there aren't enough NaLi fics to go around, and it's annoying to see narrow-minded NaLu fans who can't accept what other people ship. But that's not the point of the review. Like another reviewer has pointed out, the story is pretty rushed - it would do this fic some good to add in more descriptions, make the fic more descriptive. Also, you seemed to mix up your tenses a little - since this fic is written in past tense, sentences like '...Loke asked Natsu to go to their merchandise sale...' should be '...Loke HAD asked Natsu...', since that happened /before/ present time. I particularly like the idea - I believe it would appeal to even more people if you slowed things down a bit and fixed up whatever errors there are.

I like it. Don't let that reader spread a false rumor on this story because Hiro Mashima never said that.

It's seems we have something in common I'm glad to see another NaLi fan and hope you will continue this story and make a lot more in the future thanks

Yay! I am a nali shipper too. Its a really good story, i am looking forward to it
Thanks a lot for writing a nali fanfic, i also feel that there arent a lot of nali fics out there and was waiting for some updates...Good Luck with the fic and hope you have time to write and update more Nali Fanfics

the story was really reallyy sweet, and i hope you turn this into a long story..! _

Hey, this is a cool idea, I don't think I've seen a NaLi fic like this before, so good job!

Hell yeah, NaLi for the win~! xD Great story btw, and I have to admit, I love your little A/N at the end. I don't get why shipping NaLi is worth questioning about really, because it's honestly a really cute ship! Thanks for making such a cute one-shot, and I hope to see you make more!

Love it! I love reading Nali fics that don't make Lisanna and Lucy fight over Natsu cause they dont in the anime/manga... I hope you write more Nali fics in the future...

Great story please continue

I'm a Nalu shipper, but it doesn't mean I am hating Nali fictions because what I seek from fanfiction is the story itself, so I'm not going to rant about Nali or Nalu and so on. Moving on; it's a nice opening, but somehow it's a little bit off and too fast-paced for my liking. Maybe you should add some descriptive sentences to help the reader imagine the euphoria or the situation of the concert like how enthusiastic the audience is and stuff. Try to slow down and not moving from one scene to another one too quick. Reader may (or may not) find this chapter too hollow, too monotone and present less surprise than you might've planned. I'm sorry if my review is too long, but I do believe that this fiction has potential and your job is to exploit the potential. And don't get discouraged from the rude reviewer who oppose Nali; they're just bored and decided to crash their boredom here. Well, good luck!