Oooooh plot twist! I love it! You are such an amazing writer!

ADORABLE. You really are the most brilliant writer

MORIARTY! Love it!

This is so heartbreakingly beautiful

Okay, you're basically Shakespeare if he wrote fanfiction

Beautiful writing and well thought out (though a bit saddening) plot

Amazing writing. Loving the plot line

Oh, I don't know where you get your ideas from, but they are amazing!

Fantastic finish! I hope you're planning to continue this story as you've left us with a marvelous set-up. Moriarity as mayor...fascinating to think how Sherlock and company would counter that move.

What?! Did not see that coming at all!

(...does that mean a sequel is in the works?)

Lovely job, as always. I don't know how you manage to pull off such a convincing first-person POV. And then to have multiple first-persons! You always nail everyone's voice. Very well done.

(And on a complete side note, can I just say that I don't think I'm a linguistic slouch by any stretch. I read voraciously and love words. And yet you have brought several completely new ones to my attention with this story (without coming across as pretentious for their usage. They totally fit with the Victorian tone). That's very well done, too!)

Aww.

Arghhhh! She's staying away to protect him! But it's not working!

Oh, Sherlock. And oh Molly.

And oh Jim, go away!

The poor man doesn't have any tools to cope with heartbreak, does he.

Nope, Irene, not yours to play with.

'More than possible, it is probable.' Perfect.

Poor Greg.

At least he knows when he's beaten!

'I have to look away, since sometimes, and on some days, it is better to be blind' is just. Wow.