Wait. Chat Noir saw all the pictures of him hanging up in her room? But I thought that Alya took all those down last chapter.

And Chat should absolutely have a good idea what it's like for Marinette, considering that he was in basically the same situation a couple chapters ago. He might not be able to tell Marinette that, but he should at least think it.

Truthfully, I'm not sure why Chat went to Marinette's room at all, but I can let that part slide. After all, even Adrien doesn't know why he did that.

I don't like leaving negative reviews... But this chapter could use some edits. You've got several run-on sentences that could be made to flow more smoothly.

And Marinette and Alya are acting WAY over the top. As in, it should have taken Adrien outright laughing at her crush before making out with Chloe to get them to react like this. Just hearing that there's someone he likes? Well, I could see Marinette crying in the bathroom, and Alya being irritated at Nino's lack of tact. But this is too far.

It must be really hard for them.

marrinette is an idoit she is a total different person as her superhero persona and she knows that so why can't cat noir be a totally different person in his superhero persona

Well then, what a surprise XD Adrien is in for a surprise XD

it doesn't make any sense how a guy that was so willing to hurt his son and then not showing remorse of any sort after he did would end up deserves nothing at all and the really annoying part is the meaningless and pathetic apology he gave,this guy hurt a lot of people just for a ridiculous reason{power} and to be honest if i was adrien or his mom i wouldn't forgive him i wouldn't even sleep under the same roof as him

Same! I love Cat Noir, he's my preferred character and I think he's gorgeous. I want to write a fanfiction on him but I can't. Could you please, please, please write a couple of stories about him getting shots/needles/vaccinations, that would make me really happy!
Also, for criticism, I didn't really read it, I just skimmed it (cause I didn't have enough time) but from what I could see it was really well edited and written.
Good job! :)

Oh,no!
ADRIEN!

Oml, that is literally one of the BEST stories I have ever read. I love the ending. I love it so much. The quote was the best way to end the story! 100/10 Number 1 fave story, if not 2nd, but probably 1st. Thank you for making this story. It has everything; Ladrien, Adrienette, LadyNoir, MariChat, MAD CHLOE, JEALOUS CHLOE, an actually AWESOME storyline and buildup, totally sounds like the real show, has protective Adrien, protective Alya, mean Hawkmoth, kwamis, EVERYTHING, and 33 CHAPTERS OF IT! #BSEITW (best story ever in the wurld x3)

This story was great, you should really do more! :)

This is AMAZING! I really want this to turn into a real episode! I really want you to upload a part 2

*speechless with _* o.o

HES HAWKMTH

So much ANGST

wow. my mind is blown. I love this story 3