Hey... you wanna know my... secret identity?-batman

Please rewrite the story was just starting up

please rewrite.

I actually would like to see a danny phantom and ladybug pairing

I want to see a Danny and Marinette pairing.

Why do people do this to me? I loved this story and would love if you continued it just as it is. I like that it’s rushed and thrown together because it’s thrown on with all of the creativity with no thought for rules. Rules suck. Anyways, I appreciated you sharing the story and I hop you don’t drop it completely.

i just came across this story, an honestly a re-write might be a good thing for this story.
Good things:
brought Danny and Danni back together. Gives us a new town. gives us new characters.
Things that could be improved:
chapter lengths, could be longer
you tend to speed the chapters along without much comment and skipping over stuff.
you said that Marinette would be suspicious of Danny. She was suspicious for about 5 minutes of the story and then you had everything going on. so slow things down and expand on them.
Also, way to soon for identity reveals. give it time to build up trust and give us mystery.
POVs, you have "them talk" and then give a quick thing on what they were thinking. drag that out as well.
Its been over a year, so i'm not sure where you are at on the re-write or continuation of the story.

I just read the AN. I understand entirely where you’re coming from when it comes to older stories. Some of my old stories from when I first started writing fanfics (they’re on a site called Quotev) are pretty cringeworthy too. I like the idea of the story, and I’m sure it would be really interesting if it were fleshed out and rewritten. If inspiration ever hits, I’ll be here to read it.

Wow. This was pretty badly written.

Please continue, it's awesome! :3

please, please rewrite I just found it and I love it!

I think it would be well worth it if you went back and rewrote as well as continued the story. this story has 130 followers after all, it might be interesting to see the outcome of an improved version of this story if it was already popular as is. ;9

What’s your Wattpad username and is this story on there?

continue plz

Please rewrite the story. It as a good plot to it.