Hmm, is it really unoriginal? I haven't seen that many stories about Misaki being afraid of thunderstorms, to be honest. The way you described Misaki's fear and Akihiko's concern is really good! I've had a panic attack before, but I just passed out back then ;; The throwing up part...well, I get nauseous when I see or read about people throwing up, so personally I didn't really like that. It's not because of how you wrote it, but because I can visualize things really easily and I just had breakfast xD Aside from that, this is a cute one-shot!
Thank you for writing~

That was really rather beautiful even with the throwing up part..

That's some true love there. Oh god I was squirming around as I read that. That was...good, but damn I wasn't expecting that.

Aww this was cute and fluffy. Write more like this, da?

This was relatively short, but very well written. Really, I thought this was a very good read, and pretty realistic considering Misaki's sensitivity towards the situation with his parents. You have a few stories like this I noticed so you could even make them into a Drabble or ABC Chapter fic, for when you feel like straying from your main stories I mean. But anyway, yeah great job :)

Aww poor Misaki! It was cute, actually I was waiting for a fanfiction like this! I loved the way Akihiko protected Misaki and always showing the true love and affection he has for him, so natural and selflessly. Keep writting cause you're good!
Bye!

AHH SO DRAMATIC MORE