Nice.

Mein Gott, The ending! It was perfect! Tho sad... But perfect!

This story is sweet and sad at same time, but is good. And the way you wrote is easy to understand and fun to read. I hope you will keep writing cause you did a great job for this story.
And the friendship between them is really sweet and cute. I really like a story with friendship theme like this one. So keep going and hope you would make more interesting stories.