Reviews for What Are You Doing? (Youth!) |
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TsukuyoGintoki chapter 1 . 7/5 lol i really enjoyed this store. I especially love Hiashis reaction. |
A Person chapter 1 . 4/14 This is true art |
SakiOkami chapter 1 . 4/13 This was so FUNNY! I laughed so much the process of relocation was the best. That whole chain reaction though! I love Hiashi's version " I don't want to take them with me" Greatest one-shot ever! |
Jadeoctopus chapter 1 . 1/6 This is amazing, it reminds me of that car game we used to play as a kid- "what're you bringing to Grandma's house" where each person would recite the list in order and add a new thing until someone got something wrong |
Amargi'sNodachi chapter 1 . 12/16/2019 Awesome story! I throughly enjoyed reading it! |
1sunfun chapter 1 . 10/8/2019 Good. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2019 YOUTH! w |
Keyser.S chapter 1 . 7/30/2019 I don't know what was funnier: the process of relocation or the running of the new village. This was awesome. Amazing job, both of you! |
jtscores chapter 1 . 7/23/2019 Nice. |
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 6/20/2019 super! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
Pom Rania chapter 1 . 3/17/2019 This was FUN! I'd never seen a fic like this, it's great. I mean, I've seen the starting bit before, but never "everyone decides to move and take their village with them", I love it. |
rogueofstorms chapter 1 . 1/7/2019 I'm strongly reminded of a Passover game for children called "I'm leaving Egypt and I'm taking..." and you go 'round the table through the alphabet naming the stuff you'd take with you. XD |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2018 This is brilliant for a 1-shot! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2018 goodness! this had me laughing all the way! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2018 The "no, what are you doing?" segements were really fun to read. Especially Hiashi burying the elders |